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You Brought the Damnation.

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You Brought the Damnation.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 24th, '09, 02:30

With bitter hands around my heart, and it's gripping me then
and even if I go to try, I'll be slippin' in sin
lonliness controls my thoughts, and I can't get away
all I want to do is thrive, so get out of my way
shout and spray with the microphone inside my hand
I can't get away, hyper tones resides in lands
titanium cranium blazing men like broiled homosapiens
scraping them no escaping when abrasions hit their skeleton
I'll melt ya skin and welt ya thin, rhymes will go spin
lines are flowing, blowing oceans out of porportion
precautions are needed to beat this beastin' lyrical beatin
I'll leave you bleeding as a heathen for not fuckin' believing
come on dudes, let me see what all of you got
glocks lock your joint spots, popped and then dropped
you're not hot, you will never be a veteran MC like me
I'm grippin these desert E's like XTC inside my sleeves

You are brought to the damnation
Who are you, to tell me what I can and I can not do
You are brought to the damnation
Come on then, you motherfuckers couldn't bench press my sin
You are brought to the damnation
I am tired, of the flames being controlled by mental wires
You are brought to the damnation
it is hell, you're getting your fuckin face bashed in with shells

Got the whole nation on lock, rhyme social security
swipe your fucking credit card and steal your local identity
wanna mess with the entity? better be prepared
spit in third person, kill you with the letters he prepared
anti barack, when I'm around there's no hope
sniffin' white vaginas like they hallways of coke
I'm all dope, rip your fucking head off, that's the end of it
I'm relevant with intelligence, shells I spent no one selling it
pelting with the finest caliber lyrical cynaide
I hop inside your eyes, see the suicide and homicide
this aint no games, I'll leave you tortured like McCain
Insane in the brain, mainframe in flames
Iron maiden your face, like I rocked your night
put a laser so big around you it looks like a spot light
in my cross hairs, like crewsifix on top of my head
you get filled with lead, bled now you're so dead.

You are brought to the damnation
Who are you, to tell me what I can and I can not do
You are brought to the damnation
Come on then, you motherfuckers couldn't bench press my sin
You are brought to the damnation
I am tired, of the flames being controlled by mental wires
You are brought to the damnation
it is hell, you're getting your fuckin face bashed in with shells
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: You Brought the Damnation.

Postby classthe_king » Jun 24th, '09, 03:22

Idk it seems like you always rap the same way in every song, try to mix it up a little bit, even though like the rhymes were good and all the other stuff this wouldn't sound very good in the audio section it would get to boring. Try to mix it up and for once have fun in your raps instead of always doing this deep depressing shit.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: You Brought the Damnation.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 24th, '09, 03:38

classthe_king wrote:Idk it seems like you always rap the same way in every song, try to mix it up a little bit, even though like the rhymes were good and all the other stuff this wouldn't sound very good in the audio section it would get to boring. Try to mix it up and for once have fun in your raps instead of always doing this deep depressing shit.

Anonymous has been depressed lately. Anonymous writes about what he feels, if it comes out sad and deep then so be it.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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