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Lyrical Slaughter [didn't want ''deep shit'']

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Lyrical Slaughter [didn't want ''deep shit'']

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 26th, '09, 03:00

Verbal contortion, blowing parts of your body in flowing oceans
showing portions of potions that's ether potent to rodents
If you notice, I blow this, I just don't give 2 flying fucks
your crying ducts erupt, get bucked fucked and snuffed
Grippin gats, spittin raps, lyrical miracle that's
spherical clippin ya back, drippin attack mysticals back
Ending villans illness with penicilin like ink on cielings
think I'm feeling the realness, appealing stealing is healing
really peeling the sealing, deceiving eden with greed and
leave em bleedin' and seepin, peepin her ''evening'' with jesus
preachin teachings you see this? I even got a real genius
recieving, believing, breathing with reason and I could peep it
It's no secret I leak it with flows that peak with uniqueness
blastin' beacons with reapin' demons even when I am sleeping
My dreams and semen mix to give you nocturnal emissions
decisions to spit with precision glistens so you will listen.
blastin' politician tissues, ninjitsu rippin' like pistols
I'm grippin, it's simple, like mathmatician utensils
I'm past positions to hit you, my Flash ignition will shift too
go around the fucking planet, see your back and I smash you
attack with grapples, pop off lids and drink liquids like snapples
in battles I slaughter cattle with a cannable mandible
Shove my dick in her mouth, she has a brand new adam's apple
ejaculate apple sauce, you don't like it? I will smack you
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Lyrical Slaughter [didn't want ''deep shit'']

Postby classthe_king » Jun 26th, '09, 04:16

lol i didn't think you would take that so seriously

anyways this was a lyrical slaughter, just plain insanity the whole. Really good song.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Lyrical Slaughter [didn't want ''deep shit'']

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 26th, '09, 04:40

good and lyrically but maybe make it a song kinda like a still dont give a fuck style...no real meaning just kinda shoving a dildo in your ass with lyrics...keep it up...*jealous
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Re: Lyrical Slaughter [didn't want ''deep shit'']

Postby Yah-hah » Jun 26th, '09, 19:11

Man just rhymes for days dude. Nice verbal usage too you didn't make it boring with same words good spit homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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