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Just Messing Around ...

Postby SajN » Jun 27th, '09, 05:42

Sittin and doing a freestyle in this bitch
Thinkin' about some years after
when I'll keep rockin my district
and have Miley Cyrus as my mistress
make her rocking me till I'm dickless
I just spit shit, fuck, let me quit this
and throw some random lines in this shit
but lemme finish this rhyme with bitches

Wanna be a star, I can help you poppin some police
and also push you on a rock, now you rockin' N rollin'
I got some tall white and black ladies
Wanna fuck 'em all but gets chased by SacJB



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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby JMG » Jun 27th, '09, 05:48

wow that was dope :worship:
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby SajN » Jun 27th, '09, 05:49

seriously :o thanks :happy:


I personally love the SacJB line :giggle:
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby JMG » Jun 27th, '09, 05:55

well it was more funny then dope, but yeah the sacjb line was good.
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby SajN » Jun 27th, '09, 06:04

JMG wrote:well it was more funny then dope

Yeah, that's more like what I thought :p
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 05:13

Pretty good man. I've seen better from you, but it's sick for what it is!
Check out the "Relapse 2" thread and let me know what you think ;)
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby James R. » Jun 28th, '09, 14:12

Lmao that shit was pretty funny. Good shit bro.
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby Drama Setter » Jun 28th, '09, 14:24

Good Job man :y: , Sac JB Became A legend in this forum :p , Everybody talk and rap about him ,lol
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby Slimm » Jun 28th, '09, 14:40

I lol'd, good stuff sajn.
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby Xray » Jun 28th, '09, 14:45

Luckily you were messing around, cause I'ma give you a straight up honest comment, seems like no one has the balls to say the truth at all. One person says good, the rest follow.

Sittin and doing a freestyle in this bitch
Thinkin' about some years after
when I'll keep rockin my district
and have Miley Cyrus as my mistress
make her rocking me till I'm dickless
I just spit shit, fuck, let me quit this

Quit than...

and throw some random lines in this shit
but lemme finish this rhyme with bitches

RIDICULOUS.

Wanna be a star, I can help you poppin some police

Makes no sense.

I got some tall white and black ladies
Wanna fuck 'em all but gets chased by SacJB

That shit doesn't even rhyme, matter fact the whole last 4 lines don't rhyme. I've seen you do a lot better than this, this shit was straight garbage, even for mess around bars.
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Re: Just Messing Around ...

Postby SajN » Jun 29th, '09, 04:52

Xray: Yeah I was just messing around. It was at night and I was veeeery bored and a little tired, so I amde this topic and started writing whatever that appeared in my head.
You know that the real SajN don't write shit like this :8)

Btw, black ladies rhymes with Sac JB. I don't know how you read it, I read SacJB like, Sac J B :y:



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