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Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

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Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 27th, '09, 19:22

Don't ask me how I got them.
Dre is 2nd verse.
:shifty:

i can flow like the pros when it comes to the spittin'
written or un-written, the shit makes no difference
witness, as your souls will slowly be lifted
and quickly you'll become another stunner statistic
is it, because my views that are artistic?
admit that, everything you think is somplistic
ya' nitwit, i suggest you lay in the ditch when
i walk in, nothing about this will be mystic
yeah i'm gifted, it's kinda sickenin'
my premonition's tellin'' me i'm winnin'
'cause i'm driven, yeah i'm a big kid
i' have the women, all up in my bed
and i'll be singin', watch me grinnin'
my smile's soo big, you couln't fix it
you should leave now, you better dip quick
now tuck your tail in, 'cause here's the exit

i've sat back and watched all these rappers come
and then they leave soo fast, because their tracks are dumb
yeah the beats are phat, but their speech is fucked
even jesus agress that all these geeks just suck
and when i see them all, i'm gonna beat them up
make 'em bleed and crawl until their feet are cut
it is weed i'm on, 'cause i keep in touch
with the freedom of my esteem and such
it's got me feeling great, i can't lie
i could heal your faith with one rhyme
i could seal your fate in one line
make it come to truth and just take their lives
but, i'm a nice guy so that's wrong
if ya', don't like me say soo long
i've got a, bright mind so yeah, come on
i dont like you so i'm sayin' soo long
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby emfanem » Jun 27th, '09, 19:41

how did u get them lol
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby JMG » Jun 27th, '09, 19:43

dont belive it but its pretty good
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Drama Setter » Jun 27th, '09, 19:56

wow , Aight man I dont ask but u can read my mind, lol :shifty:
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby heva » Jun 27th, '09, 19:58

since its in creative writing section I guess you wrote it..its not bad tho
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby James R. » Jun 27th, '09, 23:00

Not too bad, but how the fuck did you get them?
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 03:48

lol, i wrote it.
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Arabian Shady » Jun 28th, '09, 14:04

nicely done, first verse had a gr8 set of multies, professionaly executed
2nd verse was laid back, had a good flow to it, ending was a lil weak compared to the rest of the verse but it doesnt make the verse look bad
Lol at the relapse 2 reference!
sick shit
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 16:00

Nice verses man, not the best I've seen from you but definitely nice :y: Keep it up.
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Robbie G » Jun 28th, '09, 21:46

Lol, of course he wrote it.

They were both sick, especially the second one when I read it as dre. :smoking:
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Re: Relapse 2 Lyrics Ft. Dr. Dre

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 22:53

Thanks guys, glad you like that piece! ;)
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