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I'm Back =D

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 22:24

I'm out of my writers block :flower:

You're just a shadow, a mimic, you're a mirror, a biter,
You're a fighter? Hah no, you ain't even a lyrical writer,
I'm a spiritual sniper, soon I'm going to shatter your soul,
In a battle you'll fold, a cannibal, I'm the Hannibal mold,
Shaped the demons of today so they can shape tomorrow,
Your heart, I'm goin' borrow, love how you hate the sorrow,
You ain't going far, no, you ain't a feather on my cargo,
After I pop your fucking tires let's see how far your car go,
No point in a yo mama joke, fuck dissing a scarred hoe,
I'll be injecting the venom into your lungs like Marlboro.

EDIT: I forgot an "a" inbetween "you're" and "mirror" lol.
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Robbie G » Jun 28th, '09, 22:28

Looks like your still in dat block nikka...

..nah, that was really pretty good. Nothing mind blowing but it had some nice rhymes.
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby JMG » Jun 28th, '09, 22:28

with a bang my nig
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 22:28

Haha thanks guys^
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Postby mcZu » Jun 28th, '09, 22:30

Not bad, welcome back in the CW.
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Spyder » Jun 28th, '09, 22:32

nice dude, im in writers block right now its sucks dont it. im lucky i could get those 2 battles done :sweating:
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 22:35

Word man that's why I couldn't write a good verse in the "epic battle" thing lol. Thanks for the comment both of you^
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Postby Steve Spag » Jun 28th, '09, 22:40

Hot shit broheim! Lyrics were nice, flow was smooth as fuck and sounded beautifully as I read it. The rhyming was very nice, another stand up piece.

Keep it up dude!
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Postby Solace » Jun 28th, '09, 22:42

Thanks Steve :happy:
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '09, 02:09

Chet Starr wrote:that was just fucking illllllll man, damn :worship:

Glad you liked it so much!

And damn you got 9999 posts :o
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Postby gutawafang » Jun 29th, '09, 02:24

Cool shit man! :y:
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby SajN » Jun 29th, '09, 05:01

Solace wrote:Word man that's why I couldn't write a good verse in the "epic battle" thing lol

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight :whistle:



It was good, not really :o :o but good :y:
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Re: I'm Back =D

Postby Solace » Jun 29th, '09, 05:27

gutawafang wrote:Cool shit man! :y:

Thanks

SLMacDougall wrote:dope, i liked it.
i liked the rhyming of ..

lyrical writer
a mirror, a biter

:sweating:

You mean...A multie? Lol, thanks


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Solace wrote:Word man that's why I couldn't write a good verse in the "epic battle" thing lol

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight :whistle:



It was good, not really :o :o but good :y:

Thanks :y:
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