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Ride The Waves

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Ride The Waves

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 30th, '09, 04:49

Walk down the street on the concrete heat
defeat the minds of the weak with my feet
an elite disease really impervious to pleas
put it to ya mug and squeeze til you fucking bleed
try to duck the knees, you will not get far
let bars dissolve in palms drink it RAW
I shrink you saw, balls like basketball halls
musket bullets balls fall, in ya cranium walls
titanium stalls, can't shoot the fuckin' bullet
pull it out and throw it splitin' ya fuckin' mullet
why you duckin to it? I'm way to tired for these games
I'm insane in my brain like I stepped in it's plane
my weapon is aim, tounge twist a young bitch
when the gun twitch the fun switch you run quick
Super Lyrical like Big Pun with Big Guns
swig nuns, made wigs spun like murder victims
I tricked them, holloween without the canday
don't need pencil in my hand to write so handay
I'm nice like that, I could fight right back
with mic rap, psych that darks head like night caps
I like that, I run around tracks like bad kids
never average, slappin beats for practice
Dumping this lyrical cyanide inside your eyes like suicide
and homicide inside a psychopathic bride so ride and die
rhythm algorithims, writtens is drippin with venom
you wanna go in them? You never can, so stop ya spittin
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ride The Waves

Postby gutawafang » Jun 30th, '09, 04:57

"my weapon is aim, tounge twist a young bitch
when the gun twitch the fun switch you run quick"
Best lines in the whole shit man.

9.5/10. Flow's lacking 0.5. LOL.
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Re: Ride The Waves

Postby mcZu » Jul 8th, '09, 22:13

I loved it, nice shit Anon. Keep up the good work like you always do :y:
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