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i'll keep this short...

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 8th, '09, 23:15

i'm struggling to get out of my slump
stumped, i don't know what to do
i just want to jump
i've gone nuts, it's true
i've lost my screws
it's the cost i choose
because it's over due
my thoughts confuse me
so i'm full of blues
one bullet hole then i'm through
fuck a wound
i've got no goals, nor a clue
my only view's an open door to be shown on the News
and let the stories brew as your world resumes
in a war towards all doom
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby CrazyShady818 » Jul 9th, '09, 01:33

wtf!!
that shit was wack
cant even stick to your own subject
:n: :n:
bet it took you a couple months to come up with that toy as shit
Cause when I am not then I am stop pennin them
And I am not hip-hop and I’m just not Eminem.
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby BILI » Jul 9th, '09, 02:00

CrazyShady818 wrote:wtf!!
that shit was wack
cant even stick to your own subject
:n: :n:
bet it took you a couple months to come up with that toy as shit



lol
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby DrunkenDeath » Jul 9th, '09, 03:12

that was nice :'(
I'm that dude.

I want to talk shit, but i'll probably get banned for it from now on :sweating:

fuckin' stalkers.
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 9th, '09, 03:25

CrazyShady818 wrote:wtf!!
that shit was wack
cant even stick to your own subject
:n: :n:
bet it took you a couple months to come up with that toy as shit


haha, no just a couple of minutes
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby gutawafang » Jul 9th, '09, 03:27

Kaotic wrote:
CrazyShady818 wrote:wtf!!
that shit was wack
cant even stick to your own subject
:n: :n:
bet it took you a couple months to come up with that toy as shit


haha, no just a couple of minutes


Well, I thought so too.
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby Noeezy » Jul 9th, '09, 09:32

rofl :sweating:
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 9th, '09, 21:36

it's about suicide
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i'll keep this short...

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 9th, '09, 22:01

U pulled the trigger at last? lol
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