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Just To Be Different

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Just To Be Different

Postby mcZu » Jul 10th, '09, 19:19

We’re different yet the same, yeah almost the same names...
Situation sometimes stiffer than rigor mortis... daym...
Sometimes it feels lame like a fifty chorus... just saying...
However, we do define love in the Thesaurus...
Yes we do, we belong together...yes we belong together
Like Scofield popping up in a Mariah video, rather-
Be that scene, than breaking out of it... naah, no disaster
We’re just growing towards each other faster
That’s why we be fighting like people who know each other for ages
Our love bound to be fresher like how Benjamin Button ages...
It’s funny how we fight ‘bout the Benjamin’s....
Having too much pride, wanting to pay for the others sins
We say so much, yet not enough when it comes down to love...
I guess we’re both afraid of making the first step...
Not the first step down, but the first step to the future, faster..
We know we already chose, yet we don’t address the latter....
Climbing up and cleaning those windows...
Those windows... windows... windows...
The Windex clutched between the thumb and index let the wind show
How our love moves the air and makes sure that the wind blows...
I guess I should show my love and my words should leave no stone unturned
I know our show is just about to start and go on forever as the world turns...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Just To Be Different

Postby Solace » Jul 17th, '09, 17:46

That was really great. Budden inspired? It didn't even need that perfect rhyme and shit to get me interested in it. :y:
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Re: Just To Be Different

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 17th, '09, 19:24

shit man you gotta hit the mic :8)
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Re: Just To Be Different

Postby Slim Axel » Jul 19th, '09, 02:23

Liked the way it ends :D
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Re: Just To Be Different

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 16:45

Solace wrote:That was really great. Budden inspired? It didn't even need that perfect rhyme and shit to get me interested in it. :y:


Thanks oMarkevelli, and yeah, it was Budden inspired. I even used the same beat he used for Just To Be Different. :y:

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:shit man you gotta hit the mic :8)
good piece


Thanks C-rizzo, I will. As soon as I can get my hands on a mic. :y:

Slim Axel wrote:Liked the way it ends :D


Thank you Slim Axel :y:
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