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Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

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Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby mcZu » Jul 16th, '09, 12:40

I’m able to electrocute you like open cables so you may like after April
Or before June Uri Geller spoon yourself ‘cause your life resembles a dull fable
You’re a sloppy lyricist so just Bobby Knight chair yourself with a table
You know I’m the realest, my wrath, you’ll feel it, my supreme lyricism is stable
Beyond physical strength, lyrical length reaching heavens sands, I’m capable
To be fly like caped and stay on my paper like staples, dope with the wooden pencil
Call it Cain and Able, you’ll fade and stay dull, stab you like a fencer would do
Faster than the speed of a cheetah powered to the two –meaning squared
You scared? Yeah straight up like that Pac song, ask Wallace your death wrong
Battling me? Don’t gamble your life, son, you’ll lose faster than a throwing Dice-K arm
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby Solace » Jul 17th, '09, 17:41

That was nice from the start man. Something that would take me a while to write, let alone keystyle it. Keep it up :y: Good punches, multies etc. You know the 5 Star drill :smoking:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby BILI » Jul 17th, '09, 17:42

Solace wrote:That was nice from the start man. Something that would take me a while to write, let alone keystyle it. Keep it up :y: Good punches, multies etc. You know the 5 Star drill :smoking:

I can see you started with givin feeds to other threads :flower:

P.S.-this guys pretty good :worship:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby Solace » Jul 17th, '09, 17:43

I never sleep on a promise lol :sweating:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 16:39

Thanks for checking it out guys, appriciate it :y:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:41

yer this is sick, shoulda saved it back for a battle :p same as what other people say tho.. multis, flow... 178/178 :y:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 16:46

Thanks for checking it out Scotty Brothers :b:
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:47

all good man... cheerz fr bein real enough to not make shitty gay jokes
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:53

yer weres tht name come from
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 16:54

^Lol, ight. Thanks for checking it out JPearson and Scot MacDougall.
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 16:54

That shit was fire Zu. Reppin the Generals hard :smoking:

And it came from you (Jamie) being Scotty's brother.
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:56

i guessed that was part of it
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby James R. » Jul 21st, '09, 17:01

It's your collective nickname now. Enjoy it :)
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Re: Quick Warning (Onslaught Keystyle)

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '09, 17:03

Thank you James to the R-izzo :b:
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