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The worst Sin Feat. Florijb

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The worst Sin Feat. Florijb

Postby D'Leh » Jul 17th, '09, 17:03

here's the first verse of The worst Sin a song with my sister, we're going to record it this afternoon so tellme what you think...the hook is in spanish!

Let me tell you a story, and it wont be nice
its really fucked up, you dont wanna hear it twice
it's really complez, let me simplify a rhyme
you're gonna search but you really cant find the light
theres a rope, a neck, just befor the fight
a little girl telling God its about the time
killher self, yes killher self, yes that's right
but let flor sing the chorus for yall tonight


esta es la historia
que queda en la memoria
que pasa a la historia
que es llamada sonia
esta es la historia
q alguna vez escuchaste
viviste sentiste y luego lamentaste



the beat is kinda crazy, multies there arent cuz its really comlicated to me, so tell me what you think about this verse.....
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: The worst Sin Feat. Florijb

Postby BILI » Jul 17th, '09, 17:18

Yo man are you gonna send me that song of yours or what?
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