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i don't know what i'm doing

Postby J Roc » Jul 18th, '09, 04:36

Give me a rhyme - i Need something to start
these aren't my lyrics , they come from the heart
- i only write this stuff , cause i'm in love with this shit
and you love my style so much , you jumped on my dick
Tell me something , how many of you did punchlines before i brought it here?
that's what i thought, i changed the site , and i'm being honest here
like Jame's R Said .. Get Me To Give u Lesson's on Line's
Cause Like Boston Said ... I'm Ahead Of My Time
Like Rain Matrix Said ... These Meta's Is Sick
Like J roc said to Sticcy's Girl... Get your Head off my dick ... lol Joke's
Like 4D Said ..... Skill's is What i Have
Like Anonymous Said .. I'm the punchline Champ!!
That's where i got it from , Cause i got lot's of em
But this time i ain't 'Dropping None' ..I'm not Butterfinger's
You Wanna See a Fist? u a 'Piece of shit' If you Come In 'Litter's'
Wait ... ur Homie's Gone ... it just show's he Lost.. ur the one that Chose the Loss
But i ain't trying this time - Check my next battle Vs Coleon (Whaddup! lol)
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby JPearson » Jul 18th, '09, 04:40

Like Rain Matrix Said ... These Meta's Is Sick
Like J roc said to Sticcy's Girl... Get your Head off my dick LOL!

sick ryhmes ain't seen your other stuff but i'm guessing its good, can you spit audio 'cause reading lyrics dont let you know how good they really are? :y:
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby J Roc » Jul 18th, '09, 04:41

lol .. depend's on what your into .... i'm saving up for a mic so Keep & Eye out haha .. Thanks for reading duke
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby JPearson » Jul 18th, '09, 04:45

anything man what you write about?... i'ma have a few songs/verses up on here but all gunna be some soppy love shit at the moment lol check out my drake re-write if u feel like spitting something quick when u get the mic :y:
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby J Roc » Jul 18th, '09, 04:47

lol anything ... i mostly do punchlines & wordplay's though ... sometime's i Write about love , or some shit if it's on my mind lol .
You gotta link to that re-write? lol i'll peep .
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby JPearson » Jul 18th, '09, 04:51

yer man here - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=63980

keep checking for my other stuff and i'ma listen out for your audio tracks on MTV yer lol :y:
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby James R. » Jul 18th, '09, 15:13

I'm ready to give this shit a 10 just cuz nothing is caps locked lmao

Naw but for real it was pretty straight forward for you and I liked it a lot. Good shit man.
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 18th, '09, 18:25

Yo J-Roc, don't think I didn't see that drop you did against me lol, I'll get back at ya eventually, you know this is for fun though right? I have no real grudge/beef with you at all, I respect you as a writer. With that being said...

I liked this piece for many reasons but the best one is NO CAPS! :O
As always you came correct but I felt you was slacking lol, good job anyway.

P.S. the hate vote was to spark a response, and I got it, so I guess it worked ;)
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby J Roc » Jul 19th, '09, 02:46

lol Worddd MC ... E-beef is just a lil fun thing i do to make it interesting when i drop lol .... i'll keep an eye out for it .

Props for reading everyone ... i got another non-Punchline thing coming up .. this time it has a meaning though lol . Original too . i Pwah-Miss :)
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Re: i don't know what i'm doing

Postby JMG » Jul 19th, '09, 02:58

good shit

speakin of rain matrix where the hell is that weirdo
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