quick verse -

[NCAATX10]

1,2,3,4 start the rap and begin the flow
hat cocked to the side and brim down low
cuz im high and dont want my red eyes to show
i try to spare it from my parents - i keep em on a need to know
basis cuz lets face it - theres no need to undergo
seeing their faces knowing im placed in the basement alone
blowin some orange and smokin a bowl full of green
and through the smoke the problems remain unseen
hope they dont hear me choke - things need to stay serene
but things cant always be as they seem
especially after i consumed these shrooms - it looks like a dream
got a mask on and hands on the riddick knives like its halloween
jabbing the keen blade in my spleen and afterwards i lick it clean
all with a sinister smirk on my face without a urge to scream
c-c-c-c-cut to the next scene - me wakin up and it was all just a dream






maybe take the serene line out? idk, im tired as hell just had to get it out before passin out for the night. expect more tho

[Spyder]

you dont need to darken all your rhymes dude lol

but overall not bad

[NCAATX10]

you dont need to darken all your rhymes dude lol

but overall not bad

haha yea i know, im just mad bored and wanted to switch it up a bit

[Drama Setter]

yeah , This is very cool , keep working bro . I like the flow