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As If(New)

Postby Spyder » Jul 18th, '09, 07:08

Growin up I was ridiculed and considered a fool
If it had been you, you wouldn’t been given the tools.
Skippin from school, I never even made it a day
Faded away, to me it was all just slated in gray.
Still hated today, I got more enemies than friends
Every night prayin to God please let this be the end.
They say the tree that bends is the one that never breaks
Well how come I sacrifice everything for these fakes
And end up payin for every single mistake that I make.
I got the knife for the job but he is takin the cake
Playin insane, but im just sittin here makin it plain.
Changin today, just lookin back on the past
All the shit planned, I havent done half of the tasks
I’m laughin in fact, always wanted the action of rap.
I gotta play the hand im dealt as if it was meant for me
See how shit turns out, as if this shit was destiny.

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Being told to make decisions as if I was given a choice
Always taught to speak my mind as if I had a voice
People beggin for forgiveness as if we’d all rejoice
But no comeback… as if all they heard was noise.

On the block hustlin, in the streets until three
Dealin weed, easy G, shit seemed easy to me.
Conveniently I hated it but I had to do it
Just waited til I could spit lyrics to the truest
Fuck old shit ima start my own movement.
When is it gonna be my time to shine on mics
Instead every night in the lights gettin into fights.
It aint right, all im askin for is a chance
Any moment wanting to make my position advance.
A criminals stance, runnin from the police
Oh please don’t make me beg on both knees homie
Let me see the green man come show me.
This bull shit is done no one has won
Not is this rap game only the opponent of one.
When you got someone good never let it go
And when you scared of someone never let em know.

Hook(X2)
Being told to make decisions as if I was given a choice
Always taught to speak my mind as if I had a voice
People beggin for forgiveness as if we’d all rejoice
But no comeback… as if all they heard was noise.
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Re: As If(New)

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 18th, '09, 09:10

Nice Chorus , I love it .

this would be definitely a good Lyric , better to be recorded IMO , Thx 4 sharing man
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Re: As If(New)

Postby Robbie G » Jul 18th, '09, 12:36

When I was reading that I couldn't help but read it as a biggie song just because of your avy. :smoking:

Overall the lyrics were nice and it flowed well so I'd say record it. :y:
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Re: As If(New)

Postby James R. » Jul 18th, '09, 15:14

Very good shit bro. I wanna see more shit like this.
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Re: As If(New)

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '09, 18:00

Wow, coming hard as usual
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: As If(New)

Postby Spyder » Jul 18th, '09, 20:09

wow thanks guys
@James, ya im actualy workin on another one like that

@ shady babie, i actually was inspired by Juicy :D
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