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Re: SLMacDougall and JPearson Collab

Postby JPearson » Jul 18th, '09, 16:50

we'll give you all shout outs on MTV dont worry... haha only joking, but yer this was a just a quick freestyle we started spitting we'll come out with an official song soon enough :boxing:
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
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Re: SLMacDougall and JPearson Collab

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '09, 17:59

SLMacDougall wrote:
JPearson wrote:we'll give you all shout outs on MTV dont worry... haha only joking, but yer this was a just a quick freestyle we started spitting we'll come out with an official song soon enough :boxing:


:laughing: our rap group name is Double D :shifty:

Double D > 5 Star generals ... :shifty:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: SLMacDougall and JPearson Collab

Postby James R. » Jul 18th, '09, 18:01

Aint bad at all peeps.

James R. > Double D > Wu Tang
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Re: SLMacDougall and JPearson Collab

Postby James R. » Jul 18th, '09, 18:06

Well I mean you said it was a freestyle lol.

But for real I liked it. Mechanically everything was good. Scott you were better because your vocabulary was better therefor your rhyming was better. Flow was good throughout. Structure is pretty hard to fuck up. So yeah, it wasn't bad at all lol.
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