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My lil friend & me [Finished song]

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My lil friend & me [Finished song]

Postby J Roc » Jul 19th, '09, 03:53

No punchline's ... READ the lyric's lol .. don't Skim it

JayZ wrote:do you listen to music or do you just skim through it?


Heeeerreee's a story , i'm just Throwing it out before we go into town
about a friend -
who i never 'felt', but atleast your the type that don't 'Throw shit around'
& if you ask me , u don't 'Rest enough', & when i chill with my friends your never Next to us
& Yes it suck's that whenever i wake up i see that u Cut my Dresser up
Let's Talk it Out but don't Complain & say there's nothing to Talk About
So at halloween we'll Just have fun & Chill at my 'Haunted House'
but i was chilling at my house , you were practically 'See through'
i felt like i was alone.. i could tell you were in a Deep Mood
you wasn't talking to me , & you turned off the TV Too
Then ran off before i even got a Chance to see you
& Deep down i know i never saw you , but i still Sit & Pretend
but no matter what you do, your still Considered my Friend
i wanted to do more for you , and show u the way - Here is a Bible
but you took it the wrong way , Then you dissapeared for awhile
i showed u some love , i didn't know that you'd throw some Hate back
But as soon as i thought i lost you , It was You that came back :happy:

Chorus [Time's 2]
My Buddy , My Buddy ...
i don't ever wanna lose you again
He's my Lil buddy , My Buddy
i missed you so don't ever do it again
My Buddy , My Buddy
it's like were camping and my Room is the tent
My Lil Buddy , My Buddy ...
and our relationship's the fire, because we Choose to be friends

check the rating - all this hype is escalading
they hate you just because of your Reputation
They always judge a book by it's Cover restored
It's Because now your Something that you Wasn't Before
so when i go outside - it's sad you don't come anymore
so i always Pity the fool... i never thought i'd say this but i'm Mister T
i alway's try to defend you , but if 'your with me or not' is a 'Mystery'
were friends again , but you still do thing's that get's to me
my mom charged her Phone for a Few , Alone in the room
but fuck it , nobody was there it musta been you that Unplugged it
you can tell me it was my sister , but really i don't want none of it
but im not mad that your here , i'm just happy your Letting me know
i gotta be the luckiest kid 'alive' - cause my Friend is a 'ghost'
but he never really talks to me , and i'm still his friend because i want to be
And i said some shit in the past and it Costed me
but now i know you never really left , you've always been sat here watching me

Chorus [1 Time]
My Buddy , My Buddy ...
Will this relationship Last? With a good Chance, It Depends
He's my Lil buddy , My Buddy..
i'm blind, i can't see you like im Cracking the Lens
My Buddy , My buddy ....
He's my Supernatural Friend...
My Buddy , My Buddy...
And When it's all said & done... i know were Happy Again

"& Yes it suck's that whenever i wake up i see that u Cut my Dresser up" , "& you turned off the TV Too ,Then ran off before i even got a Chance to see you" .."my mom charged her Phone for a Few , Alone in the room - but fuck it , nobody was there it musta been you that Unplugged it" ...

TRUE STORY :o ... lol Thought's? ... i hope ya'll got the flow to it .... the chorus u gotta put enfasis on the rhyme part but not too much ... just a tiny bit .. and kinda lighten up on the Last syllable of the lines that aren't 'My buddy' lol except the Very last chorus line of the song lol

Just the 2 Verse's ...
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Re: My lil friend & me [Finished song]

Postby J Roc » Jul 19th, '09, 20:47

added 2 hook's & half a verse lol ... Chiiiil :staticsmoking:
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