Verse about missing the girl you love!

[JPearson]

Some days when I wake up, it feels like you’re laying next to me
I check to see then realise it’s missing you affecting me
My love for you is screwing up my life, mean that respectfully
I really need to have you back to rid this pain and set me free
Because my mind is playing tricks I see and hear you when it’s quiet
When it’s dark and I’m alone it’s wearing me I’m getting tired
I can’t stand the pain and tricks no more, escape, I’ve gotta try it
Sick of crying sick of thinking so much that my minds a riot
Sounds so simple when I say it all I want is to be with ya
But impossible I know it is, I guess I’ll sit and miss ya
Twist and turning when I’m tryna sleep my dreams all just consist of
Memories of us and us two one day being Mrs and Mister
Is the fact we ain’t together tearing down your life like mine
I don’t know why, but I just feel like you are happy, doing fine
I keep hearing people saying not to worry give it time
And you’ll be able to move on, they must not know what’s left behind

[JPearson]

thank you, its a quick 1st ddraft though so tips, help, anything would be tenderley appreciated!

[Fa-Q]

good shit man...got alot of love poetry...thatll get you places




<the code for places is girls>

[JPearson]

yer break ups fill ya with cliche love shit, got about 15 more complete songs on paper and still more coming lol posted on your lyrics btw eagles

[JPearson]

soon, gotta put it on the computer, then go over it n make sure it's all TR worthy... fuck i really wish i could record! btw anyone anygood at choruses 'cause i every chorus i come up with is something you'd need to sing, n any romance would be gone if i sung on the track

[JPearson]

lol helium voice? need a fuckin Mac, anyone know anywehre to download the software for that sorta stuff?

[JPearson]

i'll pop by there now then

[gutawafang]

Good rhymes and multis.