Don't Love Me Anymore

[JPearson]

this is a song i writ quite a while ago, it's about being in a relationship where you realise the other person doesn't love you anymore...

(talking)
Have you ever loved someone, so much, but then realised that they don’t feel the same way ‘bout you anymore

(verse 1)
I been thinking how to turn things round or a way around it
Thinking how to fix it but all I can do is doubt it
Feel like I’m in a cell and it’s clear there’s no way out it
So I sit and take the pain ‘cause there’s nothing I can do about it
Then I turn to you and see you’re thinking about something else
Like it doesn’t bother you like you don’t even wanna try and help
Think to myself hope your not thinking of someone else
Or if you’re leaving me for good, ‘cause I won’t make it by myself
Then I think back to all of the memories that we’ve shared
Like watching scary films and I’ll hug you tight when you get scared
Hurts me so much that I can’t convince myself it’s fair
How you’re so clueless about it, almost as though you don’t even care
I love you so much, always have and always will
Would have died for you, lied for you and even killed
‘cause it’s like a movie cliché, when I go to kiss you I get chills
Now my heart just drops, and tears form till my eyes are filled

(chorus)
I’ve always loved you, never thought that it would end
Now you don’t love me anymore not even trying to pretend
You were my lover, my soul mate, and my best friend
Give anything to have one more chance with you again

I’ll always love you, trust me my love will never die
Sitting here alone thinking about you just hurts me ‘till I cry
I won’t forget you, will remember you until I die
Everyday sitting and wandering, until I figure why

(verse 2)
You’re leaving my heart bleeding
and now I’m needing help when I try sleeping ‘cause you wake me when I start dreaming
The grieving‘s, killing me now that you’re leaving, you were a part of me, now I feel like there’s no meaning
To life
If you’re gonna leave me then do it now
So I can start trying to move on but first I’ve got to figure how
Feel’s like I’m still in a cell and still there’s no way out
‘cause now I’m sure you’re ending us, I’m way past the stage of doubt
All I really wish is that we could still go on together
Together forever like winter and snowy weather
And I don’t know whether,
It’s my fault, what could I’ve done
Must have been quite bad if it makes you get up and run
Or maybe for no reason you’re love for me just disappeared
Never thought about it before, now realise it’s what I feared
Now it’s happening and I see that one thing is so clear
You don’t love me anymore, the one thing I don’t wanna hear

(chorus)
I’ve always loved you, never thought that it would end
Now you don’t love me anymore not even trying to pretend
You were my lover, my soul mate, and my best friend
Give anything to have one more chance with you again

I’ll always love you, trust me my love will never die
Sitting here alone thinking about you just hurts me ‘till I cry
I won’t forget you, will remember you until I die
Everyday sitting and wandering, until I figure why

(verse 3)
Now you’ve left me, don’t think it’ll be long ‘til you forget me
This self loathing state makes me think that you regret me
But I still love you, seems like the love won’t fade away
And this is how I’ll feel forever, each minute of every day
But people tell me I’m wrong, tell me to stand up and be strong
Want to believe ‘em, but I can’t ever see me moving on
Where’d it go wrong? So many thoughts keep circling my mind
While I sit and cry and try to relive what’s left behind
Can’t seem to shake the thought of you with another man
Kissing, hugging, fucking each other and holding hands
It’s tearing me apart, breaking me down fucking me up
Pain knocks to me to the floor and keeps me there I can’t get up
Can’t think ‘bout anything else, everything else leads on to you
To many thoughts to list, and now I’m stuck on what to do
I can’t move on but can’t cope with all the pain
My only pleasure is my false hope, maybe I’ll get you once again

(chorus)
I’ve always loved you, never thought that it would end
Now you don’t love me anymore not even trying to pretend
You were my lover, my soul mate, and my best friend
Give anything to have one more chance with you again

I’ll always love you, trust me my love will never die
Sitting here alone thinking about you just hurts me ‘till I cry
I won’t forget you, will remember you until I die
Everyday sitting and wandering, until I figure why

[gutawafang]

It's VERY VERY VERY direct. I mean, the lyrics fit the title man.

I like this line:
My only pleasure is my false hope, maybe I’ll get you once again

Although it's common, I still like this:
You’re leaving my heart bleeding

It's a simple and as I said, direct song. It's not EXATCLY deep. I see the rhymes and alittle lack of flow and multis. But it's 8/10.

[JPearson]

yer i fill my songs with cliche lines out of films dont i, it's just that even thouogh they're cheesey as shit i know they have a lot of meaning 'cause they affect me (i'm in love)... this is a proper old song though hope i've imporved...

do u write lyrics?

[gutawafang]

yer i fill my songs with cliche lines out of films dont i, it's just that even thouogh they're cheesey as shit i know they have a lot of meaning 'cause they affect me (i'm in love)... this is a proper old song though hope i've imporved...

do u write lyrics?

The only song I recorded:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=56317&p=723309&hilit=despair#p723309

Recent keystyles:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=63647
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=63648

[mcZu]

I liked it man. Second verse was the best, flow-wise, vocab wise, rhyme scheme wise and emotion wise. First and third verse are good, nonetheless, however, the flow wass odd at some spots. Chorus is nice. Overal I liked it, nice song, keep this shit up (although, I don't wish for you to go through another scenario like that)

[JPearson]

yer i satrted slippin on the 3rd verse i think, i'll go back an re-do that cheers for pointing that out man... i think with songs on this topic simpler ryhmes and flows suit it more aswell... goin through it now man that's why tr is filled with this shit lol cheers again tho

[James R.]

Yeah that was some pretty direct, heartbreaking type shit lol. The structure of the first bit of the 2nd verse threw me a little bit, but it's nothin I stress over. Lyrics were good. You had some good rhyming to it. I like the fact that it was raw, so don't change the 3rd verse. I don't think you slipped enough for anyone to really care anyways. The emotional side of this made this track worth reading more than anything else. Good job homie.

[JPearson]

lol thats an ol piece to i got this kinda shit spilling out me atm... cheers for thee feed might clean up the 3rd a bit, might try a love based track with some comlplex ryhmes n flows, see if it can work