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the streets

Postby ritchieA » Jul 21st, '09, 16:27

Im bored on the streets
Theres nuffin to do
So we turn crime
But we all no we cant handle time
People ask us how we doin we tell were fine
But in hyne sight were breakin inside
Standin on a wall cant get ova it so we just stay an dry up
We cant get jobs so we got no money same thing day in an day out
So were on to drugs the ultimate pay of for thugs
We don’t give a shit for the kids we mugged
They can go get fucked
Yhyh fuck u
U got it easy while were standin here lookin sleazy
People to scared to look us in the eye incase of startin beef
With shankes and gats ready to hunt down and kill all the rats
Yh this shit is real out on the streets where anything goes yh it blows
But this is the life we chose there’s no one handin us roses no that’s for the posers
With a good life they think they got I bad when I walkin down the streets in snow lookin to pick up sum hoe
With aids and all the std’s u cud want
This is all the shit im gunna catch coz I ent presentable
Im just terrible if we run in to each other on the streets just run
Coz ur life will no longer be fun
Once I mug u stab in back leave u bleedin ready to die in an ally way
Ul be prayin to god to give one more day
An it all come down to want will he say
No no noway this is the price u pay
Just coz u didn’t look the other way
This is the streets there aint no time to play
All this for an ipod and ten quid
And that’s the dent twist while I hide in the mist
As ur bein dissed coz ur always pissed
As were speakin ur tempers leaking
What r u thinking
As ur anger boils up out of ur mind
There’s nuffin u ent capable of in this state
His heart rate is ova maximum
He’;s gunna murder this kid once he pops his lid
His gunna slide strate across the mid section of his body
Now he’s as short a noddy
An nobody was there to witness this insane crime nut he’s lucky
He died quick coz he was sliced so sick
An he no’s he can’t do the time he wod of served for this crime
He’l just be one more inline of death row
Coz he codn’t run fast enough from the po po
So he’s stuck in this rut the same as me in square one
And like I sed it anit fun
Runnin away from reality not finding ur way back
Coz u ran of the track wen ur single and alone mum was jacked up on drugs
Wenu was of a young age
So u had no chance
U just sucked into a neva endin trance
Ow yh ma names david
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Re: the streets

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:32

lmao my names david!

i'll post my 'davids' verse on here... for ne1 hu dont know david is our mate(ish) and him n his whole family r fucking disgusting, it would take a new forum to explain them fully
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Re: the streets

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 16:35

na this one aint... but i writ a whole verse bout him n some ppl i know from MK... i'll try find it and put it up
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Re: the streets

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 10:35

yh it was just a quick lil thing didnt really think bout it
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Re: the streets

Postby Solace » Jul 28th, '09, 14:19

Structure was horrible, didn't find it entertaining and your grammar+spelling is awful. If you can at least fix structure and grammar+spelling this would have been decent for your level. And I'm not trying to be rude as well. Keep at it Richie. :y:
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Re: the streets

Postby ritchieA » Jul 29th, '09, 15:34

yh cheers will do
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