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In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 21st, '09, 20:46

The title says it all, this piece will take you several reads to catch the metaphorical mastery inside of it. You have been warned.

sex words connection, it's a lesson
ED with the MP3 disection
A TV, phone call to your visions
see these songs bangin in your hearin
Opposite of irony like not ironing
spit shining things, my mind is drying
Alaska's ice box, yet I'm not cold
a yeti in the snow of the mind it's gold
nebula sectors, sections of sections
disection of the disector, a question
What am I thinking, what am I saying
wearing polar clothes, but I'm sweating
fire encased in ice box as night's sock
numbers appear and form a white clock
I put my hand in and burned with dry ice
so why fight, colors are but mere white light
thoughts are shape, geometry is born
the pencil is scorn, and the pen is torn
Mathmatics, science, try to apply it
type of ice that makes lab mice violent
Lost between verbs, crusified on lines
I bleed red and white, with written rhymes
thrown to a fire, and burned so long
now my ashes of logic are so long gone
connect thoughts together like the word like
highways as born, comma's are the turnpikes
electrical impulses through the pain
really lets you know if your insane
If your insane, Then I see your thoughts
complextion of skin are cells of brain parts
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 21st, '09, 20:50

more sick ryhmes n flow... 2 in half an hour well in...

was u on bout cocaine or summin talkin bout ice?
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 01:07

JPearson wrote:more sick ryhmes n flow... 2 in half an hour well in...

was u on bout cocaine or summin talkin bout ice?

Nah bro dig deeper then that, you'll get it soon.
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby gutawafang » Jul 22nd, '09, 02:57

I can't interpret. This is a case where only the riter knows the meaning. :p
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby classthe_king » Jul 22nd, '09, 14:39

This reminds me of a saying in 1984. If a tree falls in the woods and no one is around to hear it does it make any sound.
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 16:41

showed this to 2 mates last night n none of us can get it.. give a clue or summin
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 17:59

JPearson wrote:showed this to 2 mates last night n none of us can get it.. give a clue or summin

spit shining things, my mind is drying
Alaska's ice box, yet I'm not cold

The ''Ice Box'' is the mind.
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 18:03

mates so confused they think its just bullshit... but im guna hope u aint takin da piss lol my next guess is ur mind is in control of u?
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:38

JPearson wrote:mates so confused they think its just bullshit... but im guna hope u aint takin da piss lol my next guess is ur mind is in control of u?

Exactly, keep going.
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:40

JPearson wrote:mates so confused they think its just bullshit... but im guna hope u aint takin da piss lol my next guess is ur mind is in control of u?

Here I'll explain these 4 lines and the rest will come if you dissect the words

Alaska's ice box, yet I'm not cold---- I am inside my mind, so obviously it's not cold, but because it's empty it has that feeling
a yeti in the snow of the mind it's gold--- Me inside my mind with ideas
nebula sectors, sections of sections--- Different places in the mind, and there is sections underneath the sections on the surface
disection of the disector, a question---- Me breaking down myself, hence the question at the next line.
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First 4 lines
sex words connection, it's a lesson- The words connect the lyrics with the beat, sperm and egg
ED with the MP3 disection--- Erectile dysfunction so it doesn't work properly, due to my mind in it's state, and the MP3 get cuts in half due to that.
A TV, phone call to your visions--- Imagery inside the lyrics helps you envision it, and it's also wordplay, tele= telephone and vision lol
see these songs bangin in your hearin-- CD's songs banging in your hearin, four lines are preparing you for the messages after.
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:48

soul searching to find hu u r??
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:51

JPearson wrote:soul searching to find hu u r??

A bit like that, but keep in the mind the title as you reread the lyrics over again, it will come, think of symbolisms people use for thoughts, some people use light bulbs, other use heat....
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 19:54

u use lyrics to make sense of your thoughts???
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 20:00

JPearson wrote:u use lyrics to make sense of your thoughts???

Hmm.. it seems like your guessing now lol. No, but it was close. At the end I personify my body with a piece of paper with lyrics and I bleed red and white, what does that correlate to?
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Re: In The Mind; Be Prepared To Think

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 20:04

id guess writing ur emotions or summin down on paper as lyrics... thats were i got the other guess from...
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