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Broken Heart Bullshit

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Broken Heart Bullshit

Postby InfInIte REnEgadE » Jul 22nd, '09, 20:03

heres a quick song on love and the bullshit. or however i felt when i went through it. seeing as everyone lately is posting songs on it i thought id make one real quick.




*chorus*
i wanna focus on rap
but cant
shes got my mind feelin trapped
damn .... im stuck
fallen for a girl and i cant get up
free fallin to my plummeting death
so this is the advice i give with my last breathe....

- dont trust a bitch...dont trust a friend
cuz they can leave real quick..like dust in the wind
i gotta get this shit out cuz this shits drivin me crazy
i keep tryin to act like this bitch dont phase me
but lately the pain of love has got me goin out my mind
a love that i thought was too good to find
all just an illusion cuz they say love is blind
always had in mind that forever we'd ride like bonnie and clyde
the only one to even out my evil side
my other and better half
like dr jeckl and mr hyde

*chorus*
i wanna focus on rap
but cant
shes got my mind feelin trapped
damn .... im stuck
fallen for a girl and i cant get up
free fallin to my plummeting death
so this is my advice i give with my last breathe

-if u fall in love dont fall for the wrong one
you may be happy now but ull end up hurt in the long run
my life makes me so sick from the pit of my stomache
cuz loves a bitch and u just end up hurt from it
as much as u reach u may not get things back
even if u have a strong grip on the past
but u gotta loosen ur grasp before u lose ur whole hand
and have something later that u cant hold
cuz u lost ur trust,love,mind, and ur self control

*chorus*
i wanna focus on rap
but cant
shes got my mind feelin trapped
damn ... im stuck
fallen for a girl and i cant get up
free fallin to my plummeting death
so this is my advice i give with my last breathe

- a love offset
like romeo and juliet
montague and capulet
an amazing love that went terribly wrong
too hard to let go but its time to move on
naa, fuck this bitch for rippin out my heart
so just this once imma rip this bitch apart
and post her body parts on the wall like art
to remind me ...next time be..a little more smart

you would think that she had a dick
the way i got fucked in our relationship






not really the best work, just took scraps i had from a while back and kinda put em together. the relationship was a while ago so im not really in that "get it out to release all the rage and tension" kinda shit, ya know?
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Rum and Pepsi has got your whole perception of me sketchy
Cuz when i stage-dive people are scared to catch me
Cuz all i do is curse and fuck
So when i do shrooms, you better give me 2 rooms
cuz im fuckin the first one up



When i die bury me butt naked and face down in the grass, so i can fuck the world while yall kiss my ass
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Re: Broken Heart Bullshit

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 20:21

this song is sick man, i am in that rage kinda n this hit me, good work man :y:
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
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oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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