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Return Fire

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 22nd, '09, 21:02

He couldn't hear-the-steps, I speared-his-breath cause dude's-deaf
turn 1 cleft to two-clefts, british DBZ Vegeta, prideful even in death
WAIT... scotty-aint-deaf, he lied trying to think I won't shotty-his-chest
with-the-truth, spittin-proof, this fake is a lier but oddly-he's-left....
A God who self-worships, germ-gel with sperm-cells and stealth-squritin
master-bation at faster-rates-and stored semen liters for future self-spurtin
schizophrenia gets-no-crazier, yet it can't change phsyical-apperance
your typical-with-lyrics just backfired, now I'm kicking-you-with-mystics
No gay-jokes like lame-folk, I came to burn your white-skin-to-lead-drops
no fightin-when-lead-pops, makes ya head-drop like lightning-to-skull-mops
more flashes-to-face that captures-ya-face then the pictures-you-take
your scriptures-is-fake like virgin mary fucking jesus, stab ya body with stakes
a kodak moment, hold-it, rip out ya mind, take a pic, now it's in a right-frame
I fight-lames, with bright-flames, slice ya shadow's juggalar vein, now it's bleedin night-rain
You're horrible, I'm storing-you into the closet and taking your saftey deposit
dispose of this-hoe, so he-knows that these-flows are better then his garbage shit


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SLMacDougall says:
lol deaf
SLMacDougall says:
u know i only used tht as an excuse for being shit at rappin?
XxMCxAnonymousxX says:
Ye it's still true
XxMCxAnonymousxX says:
lol
SLMacDougall says:
really?
SLMacDougall says:
ok
SLMacDougall says:
if it is
SLMacDougall says:
how can i feed ur songs
XxMCxAnonymousxX says:
Hmm
SLMacDougall says:
how can i listen to music
XxMCxAnonymousxX says:
Well it still counts as a personal
SLMacDougall says:
played
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Return Fire

Postby drasticlyhated » Jul 26th, '09, 12:59

i can understand rap but you dont joke on other peoples religion thats taking it way to far dude you have to have some maturity in your verses good song up until the mary fucked jesus part....
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: Return Fire

Postby Spyder » Jul 26th, '09, 23:23

hey man religion is religion its as fair game as the clothes you wear, you tell someone sumin it could get thrown back in your face. Anon dope as fuck drop i love everything about it :whistle:
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