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This Schizophrenic Character

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 24th, '09, 01:38

I never said I would never battle, or shatter the cattle
go and splatter this asshole, lyrics are scattered as ammo
Make minds spin like fire in the mouth of the spyro as nitro
style is viable, go and pry you too with nuclear silos
try to be an idol, get killer instincts kill you in instants
splittin you with weapons, lock ya body in seven eleven
you on the stairway to heaven like zepplin, this the lesson
keeps you guessin, atomic pressure is pressin your intestines
no questions, leave a therapist in chairs of piss, you scared of this
I'll leave you with no hair and spit, like a fucker's bare ripped lips
carelessness, to battle Anonymous, it's synonymous
to dieing in hospitals, getin dropped into pots of piss
cockyness, bout to get cocked with this glock and shit
logic like spock with smith, agent buildin' blocks of spit
institutionalize prision dudes with my rhymes,
dripping proof in the lines, strippin' slueths in disguise
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Jul 24th, '09, 01:47, edited 1 time in total.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: This Schizophrenic Character

Postby Requiem » Jul 24th, '09, 01:40

pretty good man. not ur best, but i love the "instincts instant" line, and the "nuclear silos"
flow was of course really good, and multies out the wazzoo.
imo splatter the asshole line was meh, keep it up tho :y:
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Re: This Schizophrenic Character

Postby gutawafang » Jul 24th, '09, 02:29

splittin you with weapons, lock ya body in seven eleven
you on the stairway to heaven like zepplin, this the lesson

best line to describe schizo. :y:

The whole verse sounds YOU, which is cool. :)
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