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1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby mcZu » Jul 24th, '09, 18:35

Desert storm cloak –5 Star Generals is rap’s hope
Lyrically slaughter you and tell you just choked
We do that mo’ often than James saying he’s dope
You all on some 1888 shit; jack, rip and write
I advise you to bury the mic like the Jackson Five
I got mo’ punches than Anon got rhymes
Why? ‘cause General Solace be like Richard Steele
Got always a round over for a punch; yeah we that real
No hook needed, still them fish are fin like error
Spyder drops them luxurious bars –we the cause of terror
You drop one bar, pussy? Like the octamom we drop eight
That’s mo’ than enough for prey like you to get ate
Think you can ride along? Naahh, that’s a mistake
Just pull hard, brake and let’s part ways like them Drake mixtapes
They say we the future, aren’t we?
So we’ll take rap back like that tape of Wale
A lyrical terrorist, screaming ‘I kill you’ without sounding funny
Be prepared when The Generals sweet talk ya bitch sonny
'cause we stick to our words when we say ‘honey’ –what for?
Well we in the ball galaxy like Beckham; so all we do is score....
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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby mcZu » Jul 26th, '09, 02:08

Bump.
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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby James R. » Jul 26th, '09, 02:12

I told you on MSN, man. You fucking killed this shit. Definitely isn't a track people can sleep on.
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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 26th, '09, 03:28

mcZu wrote:Desert storm cloak –5 Star Generals is rap’s hope
Lyrically slaughter you and tell you just choked
We do that mo’ often than James saying he’s dope
You all on some 1888 shit; jack, rip and write
I advise you to bury the mic like the Jackson Five
I got mo’ punches than Anon got rhymes
Why? ‘cause General Solace be like Richard Steele
Got always a round over for a punch; yeah we that real
No hook needed, still them fish are fin like error
Spyder drops them luxurious bars –we the cause of terror
You drop one bar, pussy? Like the octamom we drop eight
That’s mo’ than enough for prey like you to get ate
Think you can ride along? Naahh, that’s a mistake
Just pull hard, brake and let’s part ways like them Drake mixtapes
They say we the future, aren’t we?
So we’ll take rap back like that tape of Wale
A lyrical terrorist, screaming ‘I kill you’ without sounding funny
Be prepared when The Generals sweet talk ya bitch sonny
'cause we stick to our words when we say ‘honey’ –what for?
Well we in the ball galaxy like Beckham; so all we do is score....

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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 26th, '09, 15:18

bump, READ HIS SHIT.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby Spyder » Jul 26th, '09, 23:19

dam fuck son i just got on here and first time i seen this shit
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Re: 1/5 Of A General Storm

Postby mcZu » Jul 27th, '09, 14:03

Thanks to you all. Appreciate you checking it out :y:
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