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Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 19:42

You really think your great,Your a fkn Silly Fake
Niigga you need Fate,Its ok give me hate
I dont consider you,I'll just bleed blue
At least i am true,I dont feed a crew
U wanna prostest?U really can sue
It is another test,it Would offend you
Your born by a mess,Blame your mom dude
Shes a prostitute,Yes,Theres nothin u can do
Talkin bout tv Set,Thats ur life damn fool
Cant see but i bet,U really hate school
Cuz u aint got a friend,U pretend,to be cool
It aint what they meant,When they said you rule
Do not miss understand,They just cant be rude
This was a diss man,U'r" Miss im BI"..Good :D
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby mcZu » Jul 24th, '09, 19:45

Lamest attempt ever, period.
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 19:45

mcZu wrote:Lamest attempt ever, period.

Keep on hating^^
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby mcZu » Jul 24th, '09, 19:47

It's not hate, it's just a fact. Really...that was awefull.
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Jul 24th, '09, 19:50

lol yea that was pretty bad..
see they can trigger me but they'll never figure me out...

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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Emadyville » Jul 24th, '09, 19:51

ShAdY CaPo 08 wrote:lol yea that was pretty bad..

:y: :y: :y:
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 19:52

i know, cuz u get offended by just reading it, u too^^ i know
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Jul 24th, '09, 19:56

no, but it really is horrible ^^
see they can trigger me but they'll never figure me out...

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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 19:58

ShAdY CaPo 08 wrote:no, but it really is horrible ^^

why?=( hhahaha
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 20:03

SLMacDougall wrote:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=64419 mines better :8)

ye mine was maybe lame lol i wrote it in 30 seconds LOL
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Almostlity » Jul 24th, '09, 20:03

James > You. Admit it.
Trimss wrote:> Alm goat
> Alm still goat

> Alm goat


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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Brandon S » Jul 24th, '09, 20:04

Why do you keep challenging James to a battle? Your gonna continue to get destroyed each and every time
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby James R. » Jul 24th, '09, 20:06

Lmao please keep coming at me. This must be how Em felt when Haystack dissed him.
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 20:08

James R. wrote:Lmao please keep coming at me. This must be how Em felt when Haystack dissed him.

uhmmmmmm u are too fag to be eminem Hahahhaa
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Re: Some Lines For James^^

Postby James R. » Jul 24th, '09, 20:12

And you're too garbage to be Haystack
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