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Damn james...

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 23:28

You Dont even Have a Fkn Life to talk
u never went with girls outside to walk
u really suck man,never had a girlfriend
no one fkn likes u,cant u understand???
your so fkn ugly,u really disgust me
please get a life,and then u can discuss me
No girl would look at you,and if they really do
its just to get a fkn Clue,who the hell are u
it might sound bad but it is really true
lonely your so sad,you aint got a crew
homie it upsets,maybe i was cruel
u'll never get respect,thats why i got the fuel
is ur life worth livin,do u ask yourself???
ur better be leavin,better blast yourself
ull never have a future,cuz u never had a past
took off uuur cute shirt,fuked u in the ass
ur a complicated person,u hated to be nursin
u got raped worsen, exagerated cursin
dont ,try, -to fuk with me,/hide!..it sucks to be-
you,a fkn wannabe,these motherfukers wanna see
how bad when i get angry,im bad so u better Flee
agree or dissagree,but the net is ur Key
cant live without it,so dont try to hide it
spend ur free time,watching gay Porn
i offend a G Mind,washing his day horn
but hey,its okay,ill stay,to display
the unsay of today;james may lay,orgasm my wordplay
ate u like a souffle,i slay u like Poopay
this is a bliss,kiss my twisted fist,
admit the shit i spit,would submit u to commit a quit
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 23:35

McMaybe wrote:Wow, that was the absolute BEST diss I've ever read.

Thx^^
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Re: Damn james...

Postby JMG » Jul 24th, '09, 23:38

McMaybe wrote:Wow, that was the absolute WORST diss I've ever read.
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Solace » Jul 24th, '09, 23:39

That was...Terrible.

I was wrong, you haven't improved.
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Solace » Jul 24th, '09, 23:42

Scott come on, how can you honestly say that wasn't garbage? "Watching gay porn" shit that was clever?
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 23:43

SLMacDougall wrote:lol, tough crowd. they just hate you dude, take no notice .. it wasn't a bad verse :y:

hehe i know,its like when u hate someone and he asks u 'wat do u think of this' he ll tell u its awefull man it sucks HHAHHAHAHAH

thx dougall though^^ xD
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 23:43

Solace wrote:Scott come on, how can you honestly say that wasn't garbage? "Watching gay porn" shit that was clever?

washing ur day horn?HAHAHHA
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Solace » Jul 24th, '09, 23:44

Yeah but if you haven't noticed I'm not one of those people who just because I dislike you I'm going to lie. God that was garbage, and me and Scotty aren't being buddy buddy at this moment but if his shits dope I'll tell him. I even said that his diss against me was dope.

But you're still trash.
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Solace » Jul 24th, '09, 23:48

For a piece it's iight, below average but not that bad. But for a diss its completely shit. And most of this was about being gay...Weren't you one to say that gay jokes are played out and wack?

I'm out of this topic, rather not keep clicking here and seeing that garbage writing.
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Re: Damn james...

Postby JMG » Jul 24th, '09, 23:51

I dont even know who he is to hate him, and i still give it a 0/10
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Re: Damn james...

Postby Le Tunisien » Jul 24th, '09, 23:58

JMG wrote:I dont even know who he is to hate him, and i still give it a 0/10

maybe u dont know but since you are james's personal dick rider ofc ull give me even -1/10^^ ROFL
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Re: Damn james...

Postby JMG » Jul 25th, '09, 00:00

hmm
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

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Re: Damn james...

Postby James R. » Jul 25th, '09, 00:51

I honestly didn't think you could get any worse than the last thing you posted in CW but I was wrong... this shit is whack as fuck. If you're gonna diss me then at least put some time into it.
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Re: Damn james...

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 00:53

lol dont even know this guy but it was shokcingly bad, write a diss bout me please it looks fun
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
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