dad

[ritchieA]

latly i've bin findin it hard
losin ma gaurd
even though i love u so much
hidin behind a brave face
really im a discrase puttin on this face
coz i love u
i should'nt tell people it dont bother me when they ask bout u
and even though i dident really know you this feelins true

i got a replacement whos great
but it aint the same coz u left the game
when i was young really i had no chance against a whole family
i fink about it dayly
i refer to him as dad but it aint true
an no one knows what i bin through anless u bin through it to
then we'll fit into the same shoe
no matter where when or who

i dont no how to cope just runnin on hope
but u ent cum back
so sumtyms i just lose track
are u watchin me coz it dont feel like it
just endless shit nothin goes right
an the no sight of it gettin betta
just do sumin good
i wish u would just sumthin amazin ryt here right now just were im stood

i just shut down
i dont even give off a frawn u ask why i dont get angry
but theres no point
it anit gunna bring u back even when we sing
diss song deep inside there somthin wrong
its bin so long why did u leave
y did he take u coz bein a dads what makes you
but u just broke me
u might aswell of just choked me

i hope to see u one day
but by then it'l be to late
ma whole life will have gone by
and no matta how hard i try one day im gunna die
and we'll meet and ill break down at ur feet
we'll finally be together forever
wateva happens il always belive that ull neva leave again
ino that if i had of known u i would of rated u a ten but untill then.

[JPearson]

this is purely criticism to wid the lyrics/flow/ryhmes... because i know u i know this song will mean alot to ya, n i cant tell how it flows cause u aint (nn wont) do aduio to it without shit loadsa autotune... i just think some of the words u used to ryhme couldve been diffferent, but a song like this aint about flows n ryhmes bein amazing its about how u feel n this is obviously how it would make u feel so its good, i know u could do more complex stuff if u wanted to

[ritchieA]

yh i was just finkin il write sumin bout him and it was just off the top of ma head really i might really think one through but no sure dont wanna really vent it all if u no what i mean

[JPearson]

yer i do, but it can help... look at me with emma, i even write when im out n it does get it out of me, might be the same for u... do an olly diss track aswell the kids a fucking cunt...

[ritchieA]

yh that will be jkz but itl last 4eva he a twat

[JPearson]

lol i know we'd do a whole mixtape on him, fuck me i hate him... could probably write more about him than david

[ritchieA]

yh was queit emotional spose i neva done sumin like dis b4 cheers

[ritchieA]

yh easy lol

[ritchieA]

he's such a twat did jamie tell u wat he did

[JPearson]

hes a fucking camp, weird, boring pussy who fucked a drunk 14 year old prostitue in the woods aswell as a 218 pound 6 ft 2 15 year old... both when he was 18, n is now with a skeletonish-terminally ill looking 16 year old, hes fuckin pathetic i swear i could fill every TR forum with constant things thats wrong with the cunt, no spaces or full stops or anything just pure facts about his pussynish, weirdness n just overall FUCKFACEBITCHYTWATedness... n na but i will, not on here but i will, hes doe so many things tho... only hung out with him for free lifts n free lunch/dinner

[ritchieA]

yh lol hate him

[ritchieA]

aww look at u 2 lil buddies stickin 2geva lol

[JPearson]

lol 'that went right through me... that went right through me' lmao

[ritchieA]

lol should of cum in lol instead of neakin around lol

[ritchieA]

hahaha was an accident u twat lol and il give u that went ryt through me lol