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Broken Ships (Diss)

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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 07:44

lol nice lil verse, bored of being called gay (ive had sex seriously over 300 times, not even once with a guy either lol) dont get why people are picking us though, is it just cause we writing bout love? im goin thorugh a break up n scott just likes it, thats's what rap is, writing bout ur feelings... anyways it was a nice verse, flowed well... ryhmes wernt the best i know u coulda done better with that ut youre high so fuck it lol i'll come back if people want me to but i aint promisin lyrical miracles coz i dunt really battle much :y:
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 07:49

lol ite well yer i did like the verse, woulda been better bout sumone else :p btw was that childprrof line bout mine or scotts age? aint takin a shot at ya its just i'm 18 n he's 19...
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 07:53

lol ite well battlings fun, wen u come off the weed let me know if u up for it lol i dont look that much like reese tho do i :n:
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 07:55

lmao post in shady shots man... actually check my post in shady shots, tell me it looks like reese then lol
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:01

lol mate dont be so harsh on urself... anyways ur 15, if ur sayin ur fat just lose weight :y: keep practisin writing n weight wont matter :p dont worry i wont come back at ya n use what uve said as personal either
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:09

Coleon wrote:lol I'm not even fat anymore just those have been my comoparisions I love :p


comparisons? y dya love fat comparisons?
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Re: Broken Ships (Diss)

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:14

lol im 6'2, think u could take me?.. jokin, ull grow, give it a year n every single femal relative u have will 'omg haven't you shot up' lol
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