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Quick drugs verse

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:27

Don't do drugs, just felt the urge to write bout em. Aimed for a simple flowing/rhyming verse...

Was feeling stressed out yesterday so robbed a medicine cabinet
Injected the syringes, popped the rest of the tablets
I’m infested with some sick thoughts and some pestering habits
Feels like I got tourettes I’m just guessing I now have it
Or it might just be the drugs I couldn’t care any less now
All I know is that the medicine’s got my stress down
It’s less now, thinking ‘bout breaking out the meths now
Or speed so when the cops come I’ll be round in the next town
Shit, I’ve gotta find a dealer who can provide some
I’ll pop a couple pills now then save some and hide some
I better keep my head low ’cause the police might come
I know I should but won’t, ’cause that’ll just ruin my fun
Fuck, I’m coming down now and everything’s real
I’ve lost everything that I had, I can’t describe how I feel
And now I’m cuffed, once at the wrists and then twice at the heels
Now I’m in jail, fucked, ‘cause I couldn’t strike a plea deal
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:34

lol fuck you AND cheers... come up with the title if u think u can beat 'quick drugs verse' :p
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 25th, '09, 08:43

Props , this is a great verse . the rhyming is more than cool .

this part

All I know is that the medicine’s got my stress down
It’s less now, thinking ‘bout breaking out the meths now
Or speed so when the cops come I’ll be round in the next town


is very hot .

thx for the Job well done :y:
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby JPearson » Jul 25th, '09, 08:47

cheers for the feed :y: was hoping someone would catch the lil word play on speed, well done for noticing :y:
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby DrunkenDeath » Jul 25th, '09, 10:22

it's cool, good work :y:


but drugs are good.
I'm that dude.

I want to talk shit, but i'll probably get banned for it from now on :sweating:

fuckin' stalkers.
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby gutawafang » Jul 25th, '09, 16:22

It’s less now, thinking ‘bout breaking out the meths now
Or speed so when the cops come I’ll be round in the next town

I liked those lines the most. It's a pretty good QUICK verse man. :y: :y:
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby InfInIte REnEgadE » Jul 25th, '09, 17:26

sick man. just fuckin sick :y:
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby James R. » Jul 25th, '09, 17:26

Stepped up the rhyming game in this one, and even though you don't do drugs or w/e it was still mad entertaining. Good job man. Keep pushin
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby Ice_Scarred » Jul 26th, '09, 03:16

Your rhyming was really good on this one. Topic wise it was on some Slim Shady drug junkie outrageous cool shyt. lol...I enjoyed it. Rhyme schemes are another key for me. I enjoyed yours, and I'll read some of your other shyt when I have time. You should've named this something! lol
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby drasticlyhated » Jul 26th, '09, 03:23

[quote="JPearson"]Don't do drugs, just felt the urge to write bout em. Aimed for a simple flowing/rhyming verse...

Was feeling stressed out yesterday so robbed a medicine cabinet
Injected the syringes, popped the rest of the tablets
I’m infested with some sick thoughts and some pestering habits
Feels like I got tourettes I’m just guessing I now have it
Or it might just be the drugs I couldn’t care any less now
All I know is that the medicine’s got my stress down




thats my fave part good job man :b: :smoking:
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: Quick drugs verse

Postby JPearson » Jul 26th, '09, 05:42

lol cheers for all the feed people... kinda think ur all just happy it wern't bout love lol but seriously i appreciate the comments n i guess i should name it... any ideas?
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