Deadly Combination (I'm tired as shit?)

[James R.]

The rhyming was tight and the flow was solid, but it was kinda random lol. Good shit though man. I enjoyed reading it cuz the mechanics were on top.

[James R.]

Yeah man definitely. PM me the verse(s) so I can catch the vibe

[drasticlyhated]

solid flow i like how it never had any breaks it kept ryhming i'd love to hear that with a sick beat

[MC Anonymous]

wtf I know right?

the sweat blood and tears, it just mixes into vapor
moving mountains, who's counting, putting syllables to the paper
the moment of sleep, I sealed it just to savor, hopin to beat
the feelin of the razor, copin with heat, the devil on my shoulder
feels like an atlas stone, I can't get level with the boulder
[b]in the kettle set to smoulder, man I'm gettin older
can't stand it, it's gettin colder, the frost on my breath now
praisin death, anything less is just a let down
silent screams I let out, feels like I'm chockin back
I clear my throat just to have it closin back
clothes, blood soakened black, trapped I pound a door
just to be met with a white robe and crown of thorns[/b]

Wtf..
Rhyming was iight, so was flow, I didn't like much at all. Nothing was as good as your usual shit, and I was bored as fuck at the bolded line and forced myself to read past it so I can give proper feed.