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Quick Write

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 01:56

Lyricists who spit the shit so quick don’t exist boy there ain’t none
Make you go red with embarrassment like paint balls out a paint gun
Say something clever ill come back run away from
The rhymes I mix in lines leave you with nothing to say ‘umm’
You’re stuck for thinking up words
While my mind is racing rhymes coming out in there herds
Got a couple adjectives a couple nouns and some verbs
To leave your brain spinning round surrounded by some birds

quick few lines i thought up, listening to Old Times Sake... think that was obvious :p
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Quick Write

Postby D'Leh » Jul 27th, '09, 02:14

aight nice one man!
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Re: Quick Write

Postby drasticlyhated » Jul 27th, '09, 02:19

haha sweet dude :b:
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: Quick Write

Postby gutawafang » Jul 27th, '09, 02:40

That sounded quick and effortless. But it's still good man. Still good. :y:
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Re: Quick Write

Postby ritchieA » Jul 27th, '09, 22:15

this is pretty gd didnt fink its ur best work though we need to make a sick one and post on audio
:8)
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