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Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 09:24

Another quick verse about drugs...

This little blue pills gives me a beautiful feel
Addicted so I grip it ‘til my cuticles peel
Pop a couple more to get a super cool chill
The more I take more broke I get but I will do them all still
Even though I wake every morning being broke and feeling ill
With my eyes so red don’t know how the fuck I’m seeing still
I’ma still go buy some more and pop ‘em just to feel the thrill
And forget about all my debts and the fact that I might get killed
‘cause when I’m on them, I’m so high and fucking invincible
And forget about all my problems, priorities and my principles
It’s my world, my rules, nothing else matters
Do what I want when I want, they’re the only factors
To my chemical made world
No worries, it’s like a paradise
Like a night in Vegas when you’re carrying a fixed pair of dice
But then the next day comes, I’m back on earth my minds right
Well not completely, i killed a bit of it off from last night
But now I’m aware of my surroundings, I’m in debt and bad health
Urgent need of quick cash, in urgent need of quick help
Medical treatment and money, I’ve bought young age death on myself
No wait I haven’t, ‘cause I got a few more blue pills on my shelf
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby Slovinec » Jul 27th, '09, 10:18

shit dont make sense, why yall start talking about pills and shit, so many biters
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 10:20

what?
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby ritchieA » Jul 27th, '09, 22:09

ur weird sumtyms lol it was alryt uv'e dne beta
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 23:50

how?
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 23:53

lol wern't expecting that one... proper feed doofus...
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 23:56

yer it's written to a beat, wouldn't post an un-flowing verse! :o
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 27th, '09, 23:57

ok then indeed dingus ;)
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 04:07

dont be steelin ma word u indeedicated arsehole lol jkz
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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby Emadyville » Jul 28th, '09, 04:11

I see what dude was sayin cause you're talkin all about pills ya know cause relapse was alllll about that shit, I liked it tho, beginning half was dope kinda fell off, but the pair of dice line/rhyme I really liked, good work :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Chemical Made World

Postby JPearson » Jul 28th, '09, 04:12

yer see what u mean by the relapse thing... really aint tryna bite Ems shit though... cheers for the comments :y:
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