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No Held Bars

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 28th, '09, 02:01

I rock mics like brock if he was a rapper
I make ya chest shake like your seeping with laughter
My eyes can't look at the letters you see
cause nobody on this site is even better then me
Lyrically, I will retain my fame
My flames in your brain will fry your mainframe
Watch as I maintain verbal carnage
my skin turns red and I just start this
Recording monster, I go and ponder
If I will kill you inside your slumber
Don't try to impress, or get depressed
in abyss with just one twist of my wrist
spit on your lips like cum shots in porn
run shots and scorn, the devil with horns
Nobody can step in my style's shoes
Cause' I can really freestyle for miles too

Anonymous is pissed off, you all rip soft
microsoft lyrics get crashed like lift off
You spit coughs, I spit the aids and flames
beside certian people, yall aint in my plane.

Lyrically, I right with my iris, try this
that means my eyes twist light inside fires
to the right just like REM, and then
spin thoughts from the eyes right to my pen
Spit venom when I grip pens and split them
lyrical verbalist, ready for victims
Don't fuck with Anonymous, if you try
take fluids in ya body and sip it dry
Spit flames in throat and watch you choke
how can you come hard if ya crotch is broke
Stupid motherfuckers, will you learn
my skills will burn like pyromaniac sperm
nitro cardiac germs, my disease I got
my heart pumps heat, I spit it like glocks
I rip this, why not? I'm to hot for this drop
instrumental burns, notes turn and rot

Anonymous is pissed off, you all rip soft
microsoft lyrics get crashed like lift off
You spit coughs, I spit the aids and flames
beside certian people, yall aint in my plane.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: No Held Bars

Postby JPearson » Jul 28th, '09, 02:02

Sick lyrics, ryhmes n flow was on top man... look forward to the audio
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: No Held Bars

Postby gutawafang » Jul 28th, '09, 02:06

The best line: microsoft lyrics get crashed like lift off

The whole thing was pretty good man. But some words were old and I've heard some of the phrases before. But all in all, you pieced them together and it's great man. :y:
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Re: No Held Bars

Postby Spyder » Jul 28th, '09, 02:10

dope man, but take this to heart dont rhyme just to rhyme namean? u didnt do it much, but a hint was visible
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Re: No Held Bars

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 10:40

i liked it all sept the part bout brock if he was a rapper but it was gd other then that :y:
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Re: No Held Bars

Postby Solace » Jul 28th, '09, 14:12

Dope piece man i loved the flow and overall it was lyrically nice :y:
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Re: No Held Bars

Postby classthe_king » Jul 29th, '09, 04:53

Not your best work. I've seen netted from you but still a lyrical slaughter compared to most.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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