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Dreaming The Cheating

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Re: Dreaming The Cheating

Postby gutawafang » Jul 30th, '09, 02:54

WOW.
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Re: Dreaming The Cheating

Postby JPearson » Jul 30th, '09, 08:58

very good... can tell it flows perfectly straight away n the multis all link together... very well done doofus :y:
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Re: Dreaming The Cheating

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 30th, '09, 09:14

Yeah , Nice Verse , Rhyming is dope , Keep it up scotty boy . :y:
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Re: Dreaming The Cheating

Postby lilrossy » Jul 30th, '09, 09:39

holy shit man, dat was awesome. loved the rhyme scheme, flowed really well. it was a good read. keep it up. :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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