Got It Ya Fuckin Skirt!

[lilrossy]

Better keep ya name Annonymous, or im cummin ta were ya live, nd believe me im bringin harm,
hopin it wouldn't cum ta dis, but ima brutally beat cha, like americans did communist in vietnam,
im tryin ta stay calm, while i sit bak watchin u act like ya flawless, thinkin ur da rawest,
but any motherfucka can write rhymes usin a thesaurus, shit a fuckin joke is wat i call dis,
ima shred ya like fuckin chedda, bitch u beta be ready for a beating, u gon drop dead bra,
cuz u've seen wat happens to fuckin jokers, they stop breathing like Heath Ledger,
bet cha regret ta sayin sum shit, cuz i'll hav ya walkin da streets, carrying a first aid kit,
scared dat we'll meet nd i'll treat cha to a fat lip nd broken ribs, blood squirtin like popin zits,
dont take dis as a diss, this is a learning curve bitch, think b4 u blurt nd disrespect sum ones work,
do it again, nd we'll see who's cuttin who's wrist, ill make ya mentally hurt, put cha family in da dirt,
Got It Ya Fuckin Skirt!

[JPearson]

this aint going at Mc Anonymous is it?? was a nice verse

[Solace]

That was really bad for a diss. Not to be mean, I respect you but you were going on and on how you're going to kill him when you can't even beat him in a lyrical battle let alone beat up some guy you barely know on the internet. Only good thing from this was:

cuz u've seen wat happens to fuckin jokers, they stop breathing like Heath Ledger,

You should keep that line in mind or something for something more serious.

Fix your structure as well.

[Spyder]