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Stand Up

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 30th, '09, 21:03

Under influence, spittin and I'm using it, spewing it
don't wanna mess with this kid, I'm abusing it
lyricist, turned psychiatrist, popping this
narcotics, start droppin' stupid scientists
ice with this, mentally imbalanced verbalist
fresh as a herbalist spittin with verbs and shit
spurting lips, spit the sickness with quickness
really hit with six slits from spit in instants
Never quit with letter shit, sever kids
reminise to all the days when I really wasn't best at this
test me bitch, I'll put a hole in your vest
what the fuck were you thinkin? I'm ahead of the rest
Don't mess, lyrical god with mystical jaws
I'm rippin at yall, constructin' walls with my bars
Lets go, no held bars, I'll rip you all
spittin raw, drippin bars from my jaws

Stand up, sit down, spit rounds, I'm around
to shine with my rhyme, break down all the towns
I hit with the tech, I'm splitting your neck
rip for the respect, break your neck in a sec
Lyrically ahead to destroy every one
the lyrical moses, the chosen one
I come with flow to blow your crew
down to the sea cause you know I rule
split you with two 22's, stupid fool
megatron megabomb makes real blood pools
spit cool block ice rock right with psych
lyrical brightness fights with the light
omega with alphabets like space spaces
high like space stations in playstations
ate cases, killed the judge and got life
digest and shit food for thought with strife
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Stand Up

Postby Emadyville » Jul 30th, '09, 21:55

Liked the first verse better but it was all well done, only thing I didn't like was the ending, I hate when people rhyme "strife" but that's just me, good shit :y:
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Re: Stand Up

Postby classthe_king » Jul 31st, '09, 01:18

wow, that was insane. I couldn't even rap it. This is the kind of stuff i like to see.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Stand Up

Postby JPearson » Jul 31st, '09, 05:26

another song packed with sick mulits... loved it man :y:
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