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The Game's Changed

Postby JPearson » Jul 31st, '09, 12:28

Very quick 16 i writ... needed to vent about fuckers like gucci mane :p

What the fuck happened to rap, it just ain't the fucking same
it's a shame that the main artist today is lil' wayne
the games changed, set of new rules and a new team of new players
but the game's taken a dive 'cause they all a bunch of fakers
taking all the money in but saying the same exact shit
like they hear a lyric in another song an they all extract it
fact is, rap is gone killed off by these lucky gangstas
who chat 'bout killing people but don't 'haha' pranksters
wankstas, like 50 said who's a part of this
guns, drugs, money, bitches and his brand new car of his
it's so repetitive... any topic that is negative
and makes 'em sound harder or think that we respect the shit
they spitting... not knowing we fucking hate it
might be in the charts but true fans don't even rate it
let's face it, no true rapper will hold a pen again
oh wait, I forgot, there's still some life in Eminem
It will be like finding a nail in a coal mine
haystack
oh... like finding a haystack in a coal mine
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 31st, '09, 13:38

haha lol dopest double was this

taking all the money in but saying the same exact shit
like they hear a lyric in another song an they all extract it

liked it
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby Emadyville » Jul 31st, '09, 15:21

it was good many I definitely enjoyed it :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby JPearson » Jul 31st, '09, 16:40

thank you people! :y:
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby James R. » Jul 31st, '09, 16:44

Agree with my boy Fa-Q about the best line in the song. Shit made me lol. Good job Jamie
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby JPearson » Jul 31st, '09, 16:46

n thank you 2 james :y:
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby classthe_king » Jul 31st, '09, 19:14

haha dope shit man, agree with everything you said
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: The Game's Changed

Postby JPearson » Aug 1st, '09, 01:13

lol cheers man :y:
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