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Don't Fuck With Anonymous

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Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 31st, '09, 20:36

Don't fuck with anonymous, telling you don't bother this/
knocked the fuck out inside a pit that's bottemless/
Sport girl, think I forgot, on this spot?/
wether you like it or not, boy needs his balls dropped/
bitch with a perfect life, keep asserting your theighs/
you don't know that my eyes are implanted on those sides/
I damage hoes in slow mo, so why go/
lyrically berzerk inside this bitch like a porno/
Cause' she said I couldn't rap, now what the fuck is that/
Do I have to drip my spittin when I'm rippin all these tracks/
bitch I'm innocent to proven guilty feeling on ya rack/
by the time that even happens I'll be stealin all ya crack/
Now why would you bother me, honestly,/
you aint nothing to me, a possibility to lose it see?/
That's all I think,
you nothing but the kitchen sink
with fucking leaks/
so when I peak with the speech
you better not say it's obscelete/
cause' I aint playing bitch, I will break your motherfucking jaw/
slice your skin to motherfucking puzzle pieces like saw/
calling names, Alex, Ashleigh, bitches/
want to come and mess like a bunch of snitches/
knuckles waiting for a punch it itches/
spit swine flu, eat the lunch of sickness/
I aint forget you getting in my face you disgrace/
only reason I aint punch you out is cause' of her face/
now that she's really being a bitch that's a hypocrite/
I could split you kid, get in my face, I wish/
Ashleigh, tell me about your problems/
solve with a fuckin' bullet, get smacked with my album/
Psuedo bisexual vegetable really suckin on testicles/
I was testing you, caught you in lies, like the rest will do/
I pressured you, you said wasn't like that, so why that?/
now you wanna cry at me, to see if I will change back?/
where your brain at I aint talkin' bout the dicks you suck/
all the cribs you fucked, I'm talkin' about the fuckin' logic punk/
Don't ever try to get me jumped again, you see I spin/
the scenario around, now you're with no boyfriend/
Bitch never fucked with anonymous, synonomous/
to exposre, losing compuse, being bottomless/
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby Spyder » Jul 31st, '09, 20:43

pretty ill man, i thought it was kinda different than the usual, but yet still stuck to the Anonymous style :y: for me the structure wasnt that great, but on some tracks thats not your first aim so w.e
all in all good track man :y:
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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby classthe_king » Jul 31st, '09, 22:08

I agree with spyder. Your structure was hard to follow sometimes and some lines seemed unneeded but good all in all.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby MC Anonymous » Jul 31st, '09, 23:45

It's a diss to people in school, so you wouldn't know all the personals. Structure is specifically built upon my breathing patterns, first time I tried it. :y:
Thanks for the feed guys.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 1st, '09, 04:52

Still got that MC A. prowlness....dope man...and this was easier to read and flow then some of your pieces...liked it
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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 1st, '09, 06:39

i feel bad for who u go against :confusion: lol awsome
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby Noeezy » Aug 1st, '09, 08:23

yo you gotta rap that over the Fabolous - My Time instrumental
would be sick on audio if u can match the beat
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Re: Don't Fuck With Anonymous

Postby gutawafang » Aug 1st, '09, 10:39

That was great. :flower: As usual man. :)
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