Lose Your Disguise

[Spyder]

this is old to me, it was on my first album but i never put it on here. hope u enjoy

My life can be described to the few that are true
Always around got my back, and that isn’t you.
Your more popular now hangin wit your own crowd
Don’t want me around while ur getting ass all over town.
But hey, we grow up things change I understand it
Now you actin strange like who was the man that
You were chillin wit out at the clubs
You cool wit fake thugs? Getting in to drugs.
Homie the decisions that you make are yours
But don’t come at 4 in the morn’ and show up at my door
Askin for a ride home back to your crib
“Hey man I’m drunk off my ass, you know where I live.”
It’s time to act responsible if that’s possible
Because if it’s not than I’m about to drop you
Go ahead have ur fun I’m not tryin to stop you
Now go home and play the Playstation your dad just bought you.

Hook – Sometimes I look at my life and ask why
Then I look and yours and tears form from my eyes
I don’t understand why you continue to lie
But I think it’s about time you lose your disguise.

I got my main man ballin all over the streets
But he seeks not to team with me, talks cheep.
I always ask what your plans are in the future
You say “man don’t worry bout it things couldn’t be any smoother.”
Well it looks like you got everything figured out
Nice clothes tight friends and a bigger house.
But you keep comin back like you don’t want to lose me?
My guess is later on you’ll wanna use me, abuse me
It’s ok because I know what to expect now
You must respect how I ingest doubt.
I try to call you and all I gets the dial tone
I remember your place used to be like my old home
I think you’re in denial bro. Thought we were close but now I know.

Hook – Sometimes I look at my life and ask why
Then I look and yours and tears form from my eyes
I don’t understand why you continue to lie
But I think it’s about time you lose your disguise.

I sincerely want to applaud you on your tricks
Now lets stop and list, all that this is.
I cant resist you go to raidin my fridge
To talkin shit datin a college bitch.
Its just dumb love that’s all it is
I can’t wait till she gets bored and calls it quits.
So I’m going after a beautiful girl
She makes me smile and reinvented my world.
So I know you two talk and ask you to hook me up
Next thing I hear is you fucked her in ur truck.
But I guess I cant blame ya, I forgot the name that
I was dealin with I was delirious to this invada.
I wish that I could save ya,
But you’ve gone to the dark side like darth vada.
I know your just tryin to be a playa impersonatea.
Sometimes I look at my life and mentally crack
But then I look at yours and gently laugh and I relax.

Hook – Sometimes I look at my life and ask why
Then I look and yours and tears form from my eyes
I don’t understand why you continue to lie
But I think it’s about time you lose your disguise.

[gutawafang]

I like the hook man. Flows QUITE well but not that well. The dialogues are good. Other than some spelling errors, your vocab's pretty good. The wwya you pieced the verses together is perfect. Good job man.

[Spyder]

thanks Guta, yeah spelling isnt exactly my strong suit

[DrunkenDeath]

You have an album dude?

[Solace]

You released 1 horrible audio, and now you have a whole old album? lol

[Spyder]

You released 1 horrible audio, and now you have a whole old album? lol

dont hate, and yea i had the whole album but i only posted one song cuz that was the best quailty all the others, including this one are quieter that the one i put in audio stage.

but how back some feedback on lyrics please

[emzee-frenzy]

So I’m going after a beautiful girl
She makes me smile and reinvented my world.
So I know you two talk and ask you to hook me up
Next thing I hear is you fucked her in ur truck

that goes hard man, real hard. props

[Arabian Shady]

that had strong emotions, like when you read the pice you could feel it, structure is real messy and flow for the last verse was a lil choppy, but lyrics were well written
Peace

[Spyder]

thanks man, yeah the structure was sumi weird i tried lol