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Hate Me...Nah I Don't

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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby gutawafang » Aug 4th, '09, 03:58

Very good vocab man. And nameplay of course. :happy:

You intentionally named the verse "Hate me..nah i don't", didn't you? :p
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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby D'Leh » Aug 4th, '09, 04:23

good flow, rhymes great!!"! :y:
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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby James R. » Aug 4th, '09, 07:09

CHEA! SHOUT OUT TWIGGAZ! Lol. I like your flow on this. Rhyming wasn't super complex, but it works for you. I'm glad you're dropping in here more. Keep it coming. And get some new audio!
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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 4th, '09, 12:04

well written man, nice flow and good show of verbosity :y:
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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby Ice_Scarred » Aug 6th, '09, 06:38

Chet Starr wrote:pitch black type flow, you could call me james R
which beat wants to go, I always come hard


:o :o :worship:

These two lines were enough to make me jizz in my pants. Short. Sweet. Epic.

Simple tripped out shit. I like it. Like relaxed, loose rhymes. Nice style there. I could use a kid like you on my team.

BTW, do you remember that time I PM'd you thinking you were a female from Canada? Looking back at that I triple jizzed in my pants, this time with Bloody Mustard coming out.

I'll see you in Pee-Wee's Playhouse...faggots.
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Re: Hate Me...Nah I Don't

Postby mcZu » Aug 6th, '09, 17:13

Not complex, but it flowed smooth :y:

I enjoyed reading it, which makes it good :b:
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