shit i wrote - check it out

[emzee-frenzy]

i don't know man, but this shit is fucked up...

aight, yo

i'm about to loose it for good
if i here another motherfucker talkin like "you shlouldn't" or "you should"
but fuck that, i'm going all out
i just passed out yesterday from an ounce and bottle of jack
money?... none
parents?... gone
friends?... one
so what am i gonn do?...RUN!
it never supposed to be like this
i used to dream about having a nice car and a fly bitch
but fuck that, cars - them wreck, sluts - they go for that check
and if you aint got the check, you aint got no girls,cars, or respect
is this what i'm supposed to get acquainted to?
i rather get a 12 gage and blast each and every one of you,
bitch i aint got no master card, yo
but if you don't give me that bacardi
i'ma spray your brains all over this security guardian
"take it just leave me alone i beg you"
Aight but give me that patrone to, why thank you! (blast)


Hook:

this world is fucked up worse than my mind is
when i sit back and look at it, i get quite pissed
how the fuck can i cope with this reality
when there aint nothing that could make me proud of me?
it's just raining all day like theres a goddamn cloud on me

i'm willing to change but i'm blinded by rage
my mind is so incaged my fucking nervs are deranged
this outrage makes me just wanna destroy anything in range
it's strange for me to see that i became such a feen
a hit of mescaline and i'll be spaced out like "Apollo 14"
hey Sandra, remember me? i'm the stupid punk you cheated on
at that party with that friend of his, while he was drunk
and dumped him on christmas, that means the next day
after he stuck with you for 7 months and accepted your strange way
of actin and messing him up in front of everybody with every ocasion you had,bitch
i'm getting you back boo, shut the fuck up get into this bathroom
i'll slice you up like salami, scream for ya mommy
stab you in the tummy, massacre you with a tommy gun
oh this is funny fun, you fucking cunt, be deceased
call me a heartless cold beast, cover you up with a dirty old fleece
and call the police say i found you like that
and i'll be walking the streets with a "citizen acitivity" badge.


this is something i wrote today, spillin my guts... all of it is inspired from my life, but you can see where i'm imaginating and where i'm real. hope you feel it.

[Taoist]

Awesome stuff , I really like it and it has seriousness and at the same time an almost humorous side to it, lyrics like that just really show how fucked up life is.

[BILI]

dope

[emzee-frenzy]

thanks guys

[JPearson]

that was well entertaining to read... nice work!

[emzee-frenzy]

thnkx

[gutawafang]

The flow's on and off. But it's pretty good except some common lines like "i rather get a 12 gage and blast each and every one of you". The second verse was THE FLY shit man. I mean, it's better than the first verse. Good nameplay, and some rhyme skills put in use. Keep it coming.

[emzee-frenzy]

yeah i know, i love that fucking line and i wanted it there, anyway i'm just getting started i gotta practice, thnkx

[D'Leh]

awesome dude

[emzee-frenzy]

thx zurdito, man this is old shit, totally forgot about this, man it seems that i improoved