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Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

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Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 04:33

Impale your intestines around your spinal
electricity goes and burns your vitals
It doesn't even leak when I spew it
abuse it when I slice you in the chest and you start loosin
all the blood inside your heart from your chambers
I flame ya, your in danger, sprain ya with my fuckin' anger
Listen I could rap, I could rap ya fuckin' skull around ya face
till your sockets connect to the back of your brain
This is cut throat motherfucker, what do you know?
nothing but blows on top your chest, you have somthin' to show
torture method weapons spittin in seconds,it's a lesson
so listen, the questions lies deep inside your fuckin' intestines
knife cuts soo deep, your spirit bleeds ectoplasm
got you bouncin' like techno-spasms, a rap magnum assassin
my cash is right, so I can slice him and his fables
he aint able to sniff cain, so get the fuck outta my table

Spyder
Sick shit I spit to rip bitches in Kibblez n’ Bits
stick dicks through lips till you dribble from it.
Never find an MC as ill as me, lyrical guillotine
you bout to witness a fuckin miracle sit still-and-see.
Cuz diligently, for me you see murder is a must
voice like ultra-violet rays to convert her to dust
squirted and bust, til I left her choked, throat bloated
pumped up so much cum that her lungs exploded.
My knives like mother fuckin weapons to end this
voodoo rituals, hell yes I’ve been known as eccentric
you can never contest wit, what I have in the basement so face it
I’m amazin I need someone with skills adjacent to play wit.
Insomniac never sleeps, im comin at night like nocturnal emissions
torture chambers change ya, this is the real Impossible Mission.
Never the less, I’ll sever the rest, bullets enter the chest
and left you for dead after those shits shredded you vest.
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Aug 6th, '09, 04:39, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods.

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 04:36

nice collab man, we both came like fire with a topic no one has really touched on :y:
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '09, 04:41

I'd love to see a music video for this :confusion: *thinks of 3am*

Great piece both of you, MC Anonymous always bringing his shit and I'm one to always sleep on Spyder's pieces (not literally..) Liked your multies and the flows of each verse were dope. A chorus might have been nice but really like this it was perfectly fine.
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 04:42

Coleon wrote:good ass collab and rhyming and shit :y: you both did good, no chorus though? :(

and

a topic no one has really touched on


weeeeeeellllllllllllllllllllllllll man ALOT of people on here spit like Shady and rip his style so not quite< that just seemed like stuff Shady would say......if he could rap better :shifty:


thanks for the feed man :worship:
Anon didnt want a hook, and basically i ment like strate up torture for a topic. but i get what your sayin :p i can feel ya
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Requiem » Aug 6th, '09, 04:43

really nice lyrics on both parts. i have to say Anon's "techno spasm's" part was FIRE
and Spyder's "sit still-and-see" was DOPE as hell.

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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 04:44

Solace wrote:I'm one to always sleep on Spyder's pieces (not literally..)


im slow... :'( does this mean what i think??
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 04:44

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '09, 04:46

Spyder wrote:
Solace wrote:I'm one to always sleep on Spyder's pieces (not literally..)


im slow... :'( does this mean what i think??

What do you think it means :o
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 04:50

Solace wrote:
Spyder wrote:
Solace wrote:I'm one to always sleep on Spyder's pieces (not literally..)


im slow... :'( does this mean what i think??

What do you think it means :o


my stuff is boring and makes you fall asleep :o
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Solace » Aug 6th, '09, 04:54

Spyder wrote:my stuff is boring and makes you fall asleep :o

Nah it means I'll see you post shit, know its dope but don't care to read it. Like I'm pretty sure I used to sleep on MC Anonymous' pieces a lot; and infact lately I've noticed like everyone would sleep on McZu's pieces.


You know you're a general. Have hope :)
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 04:58

Solace wrote:
Spyder wrote:my stuff is boring and makes you fall asleep :o

Nah it means I'll see you post shit, know its dope but don't care to read it. Like I'm pretty sure I used to sleep on MC Anonymous' pieces a lot; and infact lately I've noticed like everyone would sleep on McZu's pieces.


You know you're a general. Have hope :)


ooooooo i gotchya :D but you should read stuff :whistle:

i noticed that on Zu thats why i try to feed his stuff ALOT
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby gutawafang » Aug 6th, '09, 07:05

That was a perfect collab bro. As i said, I LOVE MOST of the collabs that's going on here. So guys of TR, keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 18:59

gutawafang wrote:That was a perfect collab bro. As i said, I LOVE MOST of the collabs that's going on here. So guys of TR, keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Medieval Torture Methods. Ft. Spyder

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 19:13

Wanna think of summin more interestin to post on both ur CW drops lol both verses sick, ryhmes, flows, structure... so yer, again it was sick :p
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