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Re: Juggle Man

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '09, 03:33

ahaha dope :y:
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Re: Juggle Man

Postby Emadyville » Aug 7th, '09, 03:34

This was good, nice hook simple but thats what made it good, I enjoyed the verse cause it was different and I felt the TI feel with how you wrote this, enjoyed it scott :y:
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Re: Juggle Man

Postby D'Leh » Aug 7th, '09, 05:48

dope homie!!! :y:
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Re: Juggle Man

Postby gutawafang » Aug 7th, '09, 11:38

The chorus got stuck in my head even without audio. That was fucking dope man. :y:
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