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Old Me. Morpheus

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 03:06

This is a cross between 2 personalities I had before I made MC Anonymous, they were Morphine and Anonymous, so I made a new character named Morpheus. This is my first drop since a year ago I made with this Character lol

rhythm synapsis, hydrolic tounge undulating sporadic
Wind Tunnel nostrils, spots you, dalmation empathic
Salvage heart chambers, rearrange aorta so slower
I told ya, more drugs then pagodas, one hit and it's over
Mechanical metamorphosis like a beta morpheus
victorious, valadictorian of rap star origin
imentional being with lyrical streams you seen
with special spectacles, opticals are glued to screen
metaphysical lyrical without form or a signature
can be touched by a brush of reality when I'm spittin here
intangible to mandibles that spit the wack juice
if I get bit, I must be a cannable of my skin too
I'm Holographic graphics trapped in an mind I'm blastin
assassin creed of the feed, grabbin eve into adam
memories are smashin, fruit from tree of life is tasteless
makes me faceless, Anonymous to peoples tastes
fold space in half, put a puncture through the middle
travel through it with a ship while I'm playin' a fiddle
Singin' feliz neveda in any langauge possible
spit in gas tank to refill the motherfuckin' rocket fuel
scientific lines and lyrics rhymes will permit the serpant
to burst them with a venom without antidote so it's urgent
you decapitate my tounge and sample my saliva glands
cut off the blindin hands, the shine can blind a man.....
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Aug 8th, '09, 17:24, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby Spyder » Aug 8th, '09, 03:08

you know i think its ill man :worship:
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 13:48

Spyder wrote:you know i think its ill man :worship:

:worship: :worship: Thanks
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby gutawafang » Aug 8th, '09, 16:30

Sick vocabulary, Morpheus. :y:
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 16:37

gutawafang wrote:Sick vocabulary, Morpheus. :y:

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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby mcZu » Aug 8th, '09, 17:21

I liked it, not your best, but still dope :y:

Salvage heart chambers, rearrange aeota so slower


Didn't you mean aorta?

And am I supposed to call you Morpheus from now on? :o
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 17:27

mcZu wrote:I liked it, not your best, but still dope :y:

Salvage heart chambers, rearrange aeota so slower


Didn't you mean aorta?

And am I supposed to call you Morpheus from now on? :o

:shakehead: Can't believe I misspelled that.
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 8th, '09, 20:20

i think it's good but some parts were weak. great vocabulary and how creative it is.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Old Me. Morpheus

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:53

I so wish I understood the piece :laughing:
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