i'm trying

[Ka0t1c]

right now i'm at a point in my life
where i don't know where i'm going
and i'm not enjoying my hike
am i destroying my mind
b/c it's annoying i find
i'm feeling just like i'm being toyed with, but i'm trying

i think i'm falling behind
i see they're calling me blind
cuz i'm sinkin under farther, well how can i climb
outta this bind, i oughta start it up by gettin stronger inside
or not even bother and bow down then hide
on the bottom until i drown with my body all dried
found wanderin 'round the water tide
that sounds to me what a coward reminds
me of invaluable time
so i gotta lead, runnin the front line
now i suddenly realize my sound n my rhyme
keepin proud i followed the signs...

[mcZu]

Enjoyed reading it, hope you can find your way out of that maze, man.

And welcome back in CW

[Solace]

That shit was good man...I felt that emotion, I liked the flow and the multies, but it all would have been "Eh" without that sort of emotion.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checkin it out, i like ur review of this as well

[Fa-Q]

good shit man..liked the multis...i would add on to this too

[gutawafang]

That was poetic man.

I don't get the flow though. But still good sentences and phrases to express your emotions.

[BILI]

thats pretty good man,it flowed good,and as they said multies are dope...nice read

[Ka0t1c]

thank u all for checkin this out and commenting... maybe i'll add on to it, but i usually just move on to something else until i feel i can piece something together to make a complete song.