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Re: Meta5's

Postby BILI » Aug 10th, '09, 10:50

Its dope as fuck :y: :y: ,awesome man..I loved the nameplay/wordplay
Wow you`ve been working hard lately(drop a day :unsure: )pretty cool :y: :y: :worship:

i'm a rude jerk, for what i became, didn't pay no price
just know, ya fuckin wit a killa like OJ's wife
can't step to me so you're scared to dance
lines like i get up on that ass like a pair a pants ... :worship: :worship: :worship:


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Re: Meta5's

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 10th, '09, 11:58

great piece, nice wordplay
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Meta5's

Postby classthe_king » Aug 10th, '09, 20:02

Still hot, but i didn't like it as much as the last one. The crazy punch lines were still there though. This line I didn't get it at first but when i did, made my jaw drop, great.

i'm a rude jerk, for what i became, didn't pay no price
just know, ya fuckin wit a killa like OJ's wife
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Meta5's

Postby classthe_king » Aug 11th, '09, 00:30

Sounds dope
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Meta5's

Postby J Roc » Aug 16th, '09, 04:37

Nice Punchlines .....lol
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