Some lines from an upcoming song

[Xray]

I go bee's when I fear, and put stings in ya ear//
if I die, I don't care, I take no shit//
Reaper come testin', fuck a confession//
sheikh quit preachin', this homie ain't givin' in//
Livin' thin, no room for reschedulin'//
Fuck a diary, my flow diarrhea, cause this life I be shittin' in//
flush your rhyme scheme//
a bullet in your growth, now that's hygiene//
might seem, I been, a little bit of touching//
hating, this waiting, cause shit is frustrating//

I haven't dropped a song in months so I'm in the progress of writing one. Need to know some inputs on how its going. *Note: Sort of in a writers block...and Sheikh means an elder in Arabic, like a Priest*

Feedback appreciated.

[Robbie G]

Lyrically it was pretty dope but I struggled hard trying to rap it so I'm interested in how it flows for you.

[BILI]

Everything was good rhymes,lyrically dope too...good piece...maybe only structure is off..but its not doing any "damage" to it ....so good drop

[Xray]

Thanks for the feed guys.

Here listen to the beat I'm using for this, might help you flow it lol.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/63967258d41a1321/

[Arabian Shady]

sick shit, loved the punches and word plays, flow was non-stop , gangsta nukka
sick shit homes, glad to see you writin AND POSTIN IT! ya selfish bastard!
Peace

[gutawafang]

Does fit in to the beat man. At first I thought it didn't flow but yeah, it does man. This is a snippet or something? It's pretty tight man. I'll be waiting for the whole thing homie.

[Xray]

Does fit in to the beat man. At first I thought it didn't flow but yeah, it does man. This is a snippet or something? It's pretty tight man. I'll be waiting for the whole thing homie.

Yeah kind of, also just needed some input on it. But thanks bro appreciate the feed.

sick shit, loved the punches and word plays, flow was non-stop , gangsta nukka
sick shit homes, glad to see you writin AND POSTIN IT! ya selfish bastard!
Peace

Thanks bro.

[mcZu]

Seems promising; it's good for what it's worth, flow a bit hard to catch. But I have faith in your rythmic judgement. Keep it up.

[Solace]

I could figure the flow, and ya accent makes everything rhyme like crazy so it's all good haha. It was okay, nothing really impressed me to be honest it was just...Ehh. I just have to wait on the song now.

[classthe_king]

Im not familiar with any of your other work, but this was just good, nothing special. The only good line was the Hygiene one.

[Xray]

Thanks for the feed guys...and yeah you can't really appreciate the lyrics till you've heard them in audio lol, cause I'ma have a pissed off as fuck delivery going on so, look out for the audio.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed guys...and yeah you can't really appreciate the lyrics till you've heard them in audio lol, cause I'ma have a pissed off as fuck delivery going on so, look out for the audio.

haha, yeah thats how it is sometimes. I'll definitely check it out.

[Xray]

Thanks fam.