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Re: Just venting..feedback be nice tho

Postby Xray » Aug 11th, '09, 17:10

Flowed like a mafucker. It's hard for me to read hooks and get the flow, cause I can't do it without the beat. But the verse was good. :y:

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Re: Just venting..feedback be nice tho

Postby gutawafang » Aug 11th, '09, 17:13

The lyrics were pretty general and common but I still liked it cuz it flows quite well. I like this kind of drops, kinda like emotional cuz I feel things. I tend to be empathetic. That was a good drop homie.
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