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Meta-Forced (Light Works)

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Re: Meta-Forced (Light Works)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 11th, '09, 18:20

I agree with you on how its an average drop for you, still good though. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to hear Put you to Sleep

This Line is really great.
an unholy prick, sent here to abolish and spite
cause you got less shine than the amish at night
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Meta-Forced (Light Works)

Postby mcZu » Aug 11th, '09, 18:21

Shit's dope, some filler lines (dope, but low for your standards) but overall it's a good piece. Flow was good, punches were nice. Keep up the good work.

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Re: Meta-Forced (Light Works)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:41

I'm amazed at you dropping so muhc dope shit. It was definitely dope but just alright for your standards but I dont expect you to drop that mad insane shit 24/7. Nothing bad about the flow, easy to catch onto, you still on the good multi shit.
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Re: Meta-Forced (Light Works)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:46

Now all ya gotta do is stop writing and record all these pieces you dropped :shifty: :)
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