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Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:39

10 minutes. Bored as fuck and I feel like I'm going through some writers block.

I'll flip shit and rip scripts and keep writing until my wrists stiff,
Mystic spirits I'm hitting, you don't bend cause you twist bitch,
Spit like your vocal cords are twisted, keep tryna rap like Twiztid,
Take shots at me, well you missed bitch, go back to slitting,
Don't have much people to diss so I'm dissing one that don't exist in,
Most peoples mind states, cause you're living where our shit is,
So peep this weak diss, don't cry for me, are you tripping?
Rap is the hill you can't climb, you're always behind, so listen,
Learn to spell, write and rap, instead of getting ya ass fisted,
On so many shit lists, still trying to count, in fact you're Limp Bizkit,
Writing a piece about bitches, oh yeah did I mention you're in it?
You're a biter, taking Shady, 50 and Banks lyrics, you're finished,
Oh yeah biting Everlast, you'll never last, dead with no witness,
You can get Hepatitis but honestly you've never been sick,
You say get a life or a career while making a lame James diss,
Can't spell correctly, claim to be sick, well why ain't you famous?

*Notes

Tunisien dropped 2 pieces, one called Dont Cry For Me and A Hill I Cant Climb (or something like that)

In some of his disses he bit Eminem, 50 Cent, Everlast and Banks (actually 1 entire diss was banks with switched names)

I say he's limp bizkit because I'm Eminem, as in i'm writing a piece about bitches (Eminem - Girls)

He made like 304234 James R disses that suck.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 11th, '09, 21:04

Wow, that was great. Have no clue who it was about, but some crazy lines. That piece doesn't make me think your in a writers block at all but how would i know ;) .
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 21:25

Coleon wrote:JMG diss? :o

Think farther back. JMG bites Eminem, 50 and Banks? :o

And thanks classthe_king, i guess if you knew the story it'd make a lot of sense. :smoking:
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Xray » Aug 11th, '09, 21:29

.'S MOTHERFUCKIN' FIRED!!

Damn that was dope for 10 minutes for real, flowed like a mafucker.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 21:32

Thanks dude :smoking:
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 11th, '09, 21:40

Haha probably, haven't been here that long to know about the last time he was here but i have seen him this time.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 21:44

Coleon wrote:
Solace wrote:
Coleon wrote:JMG diss? :o

Think farther back. JMG bites Eminem, 50 and Banks? :o

And thanks classthe_king, i guess if you knew the story it'd make a lot of sense. :smoking:


oh the James diss threw me lol, wow Tuni man should have came right to me

he's like the forum whore, everyone fucks him once or twice

Yeah you got it. Tunisien.

Ill put some notes in to show my punches.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby JMG » Aug 12th, '09, 00:58

im confused
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 12th, '09, 21:56

JMG wrote:im confused

Thanks for the feed Jason :(
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 13th, '09, 21:56

i hate tunisien...let's all just make a petition or something so he can get banned... or whatever
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 13th, '09, 23:08

I guess you liked it then lol
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby JMG » Aug 13th, '09, 23:35

Solace wrote:
JMG wrote:im confused

Thanks for the feed Jason :(


my bad haha

but this was dope, like I said you continue to get better.. even with writers block this turned out great keep it up.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 19:47

Thanks ma nig.
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 15th, '09, 10:39

that was good keep it up :y:
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Re: Dots Fired (Quick 16)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 15th, '09, 11:03

Solace wrote:I guess you liked it then lol


yeah i did, it's dope :y:
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