Up And Coming Rappers *FIRST PIECES*

[Solace]

Alright so these are the FIRST pieces by certain writers here whether they're freestyle or written.

Solace

i tried to be clam, i tried to be cool
but now im coming straight after you
you shoulda never fucked with me
because you know im crazy
bitch ima kill you just like slim shady
by the way your pussy needs serious shavin
fatass i dont care go eat that hershey you bin cravin
keep that in mind, contemplating
just remember me and yo momma have been mating
didnt ya hear i just dissed you boy
now go along play with your toys
but seriously you shoulda heard what i said
maybe ud listen better if u stopped giving head
now as i stop this crappy verse ima hop in a bed
and rape your mom, sister and maybe brother and dad.

Coleon

Coleon for prez, do what the man says, around issues the man dances
Like tetris my level advances, rebel with chances, killed strikes 1 through 3
I’m the rpg to your humvee, young and hungry, disrupt the whole scene
Old and mean call me Mr. Joe Green, my shit is so clean, and flow so mean
I spit gas-o-line like premium or diesel , see me in the cut like children in the pre school
Everyday from 8 till 3, every day dealin, grippin on the wheelin, if you know what I’m feelin
Get in the place an get on the floor like a shell casin, time wastin, skills you can’t ignore
Lyrical assassin breakin down ya door, gears all mashin always top fashion, no distractions
Good with fractions, I’m nine tenths of the best, better take action, or sleep with the rest
When you see how I’m dressed your heart goes into arrest, just confess like a saint I’m blessed

Scott Macdougall

I haven’t ever felt like this in my life before
I can’t stop thinking about what we were doing the night before
I hate saying goodbye at night, outside the door
I just wanna keep coming back inside for more
I love you more than life itself
Even though some people are tryna make our lives a living hell
People lying saying I’m in love with someone else
I can’t believe some of this nonsense that I’m dealt
But I don’t care coz I know they’re only jealous
Even though they choose not to tell us
There’re words are beginning to upset you
If you start crying, don’t worry I’ll be there to get you
I care, I’ll never forget you
I don’t wanna see you upset so I’m not gonna let you
When you’re sad, it makes me feel bad
It makes me feel real sad
I know I can’t be wrong
We gotta carry on and stay strong
I never wanna lose you
I’ll never use you or abuse you
You have said you’re scared of losing me
Well I’m scared of losing you too,
But that will never happen, it’s easy to see
You’re the only one that means something different to me

You know,
If you go you’ll break my heart you see
I never want you to be apart from me
I love you too much; when I see you my heart starts to beat
I hate the feeling at 9 when I start to leave
The school rules are stupid, but rules usually are you see
I love kissing you in the dark; I’m in love with you it’s not hard to see
We have a spark; if you ever want me just ask for me
Together, talking about the life that we used to have
We’ll talk about our memories, whether good or bad and sad
We gonna get so close, we are gonna be one
We’ll never fight, we’ll stay strong and we’ll never be done
Together for ever, nothing can ever feel better
Together, no matter the weather
Cause this love that we inherit
It’s gonna last so long we’re gonna share it
Being apart from you, I cannot bear it
Nothing is ever gonna tear it
You like dancing; you’ll spin and twirl for me
You’ll swirl for me; you mean the world to me
You the only girl for me

I know you like romantic things; so I’ll add this extra verse
I love you so much it actually hurts
So I just wanna let you know
I’m never gonna let you go
You came down from up above
I never thought I’d find this love
A million roses wouldn’t describe how I feel inside
When I look into your eyes
I knew this love was never a lie
I could write you poems buy you roses and
Send you notes
I could kiss you in the rain, buy you chocolates and love hearts
But they don’t
Show the way I really feel, I love you more than all this
I love you more than a simple hug and kiss
I’d walk a million miles for you; I’d cry for you and die for you
I would run for you, jump for you, I would even lie for you
I love you so much you’re like heaven to touch
You are all the faith that I trust
When you’re close you send me into a hush
Nothing could ever replace you
Nothing is ever gonna take you
I could never hate you
I just wanna embrace you
You look sexy when you’re mad
You look pretty when you’re sad
You look saucy when you’re naughty
You look cute when you’re scared
You look amazing when you care
You look happy when I’m there
You’re the best thing that ever happened to me
Losing you would be a tragedy
Don’t ever leave me…
Coz I’ll never leave you…

BILI

I am gonna confuse your minds
For so many fucking times
Cause you never saw such sick rhymes
Like mains
They even scare me sometimes
They impel you to do psychopathic crimes
They impel you to kill your fucking wife
With the sharpest fucking knife
If they seize you`ll easily take someones life
You`d never again have another strife
Cause every fight you`ll solve with boxer or knife
There won`t be no more hand to hand fight
Look at this punk lets get rid of him tonight
He thinks he can fuck with me cause i`m white
But not,you see nothing`s gonna be alright
I don`t think he`l be able to survive this night!

JMG

[Verse 1]
Out with the old in with the new,
all that other shit is in my rear view,
im swithing the gear 2,
tryin to make the worst days into the best,
all the shit i went though i confess,
i continued to be depressed ,
every day it seems to be my dreams are fadin away,
guess im not cut out for life,
there tryme out bin take ut i will not go down without a fight,
doubt my mite, but dont go in the dark without a light

[Chorus]
Ring a round the rosey lisin closely u muther fuckers dont no me
Pocket full of posey ur talkin shit stop it and blow me
Ashes ashes we all fall down nothin to do its gods call now
(Repeat)

[Verse 2]
I'm starting to be a true thug,
drinkin doin drugs,
comitting crimes spitting rhymes,
still shook up dont no where to go hopin things will look up,
but no what do i do what goal must i try to go for,
i cant put nothin into it cuz my soul is so sore,
my momentum is no more,
and the 4 g'z in court fees are sending me so poor,
i wish i knew what to do next,
seems like ive been hit with a vodoo hex,
but i gotta overcome,
its gettin late and this weight has got my shoulders num,
could end it now if load this gun

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
I can be crazy so dont tempt me son or test my redemption,
im hopin this life is only a test run,
so i can get another chance stick to my stance on my next run,
and every minute i reach my limit,
life is gettin colder i can see my own breath takin shit is over i need my own respect,
im gonna take the throne and call seat check ,
leave it alone its me next ,
cuz i master mind these lines with faster time i breath rhymes

[Chorus]

gutawafang

I close my eyes
To look at you
I open my eyes
Also to look at you

I turn my back
I still see you
I face you
I will see you

In the dark,you're the light
In the,light,you're the dark
In the mind,you're the heart
In the heart,you're mine

I need you,I require you
I can't be sick of you,nor tired of you
And I think without you,I will perish
You're the water and I'm the Fish.

Arabian Shady

Fucked your mama while her bones still crippling
Take some responsibility bitch,
Your about to have another sibling
I aint kidding, I’m watchin your blood pressure go up
While your panic buttons blinking, heart sinkin?
You mite not kno me at all, but kno that
I’m the real rap kingpin, still thinking??
O shit, the blinkin just stopped, your pants
Stained and dripping, Eyes averted
You aint even looking, You coudnt handle it
No wonder the air started stinking!

classthe_king

I entered the game like a motherfucking apparation
you didn't see me comin, im a man on a mission
to rise to the top and drop everyone else undersubmition
i will cut, slice and shit on all of the opposition
if you wanna learn the game bitch pay a tuition
if you wanna learn for free mother fucker keep on wishin
a first album like never before
I got everyone tied up like a prisoner of war
and thats something you can hold me responsible for
because right now im going to step to the fore
runnin amuck never givin a fuck
hate cause im white with a high income
never a bum, never a chum
but im goona make the rest of the game succumb

[gutawafang]

Guess what? I spent two hours doing my piece! No kidding.

[classthe_king]

I thought i was hard back then

[JMG]

haha damn

[BILI]

Wow I forgot bout my peace that was something I wrote something like half year ago

[SajN]

Ah my first piece.. made it when I was 13 year old I was dope as fuck
Lmao at my english mistakes.. I sucked back then

[Verse 1] Have u ever felt that u have lost someone.
Yeah, I bet u certainly have. When u’re standin’ on the grave,
and u cry and u pray, and know whatever u say its not gonna change.
U sleeps at night, dreamin’ that u pay for that Ur girl want.
U have a happy life and Ur daughter won’t kill herself with a knife,
cuz she is happy with u and Ur wife.
That’s when u woke up, knowing that all this was a dream,
eatin’ cream, and thinkin’ ‘bout what u’ve seen.
Wishing it would be like that, and then fall on the mat,
cryin’, tryin’ to keep you together, but can’t do it better.
U know why I know all this, cuz I did it!

[Chorus 2x] I made a mistake
I cry everyday,
Why didn’t u tell me?
U didn’t love to be threatening that way.
I made mistake
When u took suicide,
Then I knew we wasn’t like
Eminem's Bonnie and Clyde.

[Verse 2] I know I made a mistake, but why couldn’t u tell me that day,
when u was on Ur bed, u cried and Ur eyes were red.
I knew it was something with u, u said u had loosed Ur Winnie the Pooh,
I know it wasn’t that, why didn’t u tell me truth.
Did u kill yourself cuz I didn’t let u play with the gangsta-crew?
Maybe, or maybe not, I only wanted to protect u.
U was my first baby; I wasn’t ready to be a daddy.
therefore I wanted to be so perfect I could be like a dad.
Did I make u sad, or did I make u mad, or did I make u both?
I loved u a lot; therefore I didn’t wanted u to be gone.
I didn’t wanted u to go alone to the hair- saloon, or do something wrong.
But now u got a brother, u didn’t give u a chance to see him
He looks like u, but he will never replace u, u know, that’s true.
I loved u more than my life, and more than my wife
U was my baby girl, the only lady that I adore in this world.
U was so clever to make me happy, when my mood was off.
I loved it, it was never enough.
But one day it was over, when I came to u to tell u something,
but then I found u on the ground, and then I heard a sound.
It was sadly music from my own voice.
Then I remembered that day we two drove my Rolls Royce, and u said u loved me.
How could u say that? U killed urself to show me, how much u hate me.
And now I hope this is a dream, and when I woke up, nothing is changed, or nothing is wrong.
And I never wrote this song. And we two were free. I loved u baby, how could u do this to me…

[Chorus 2x]

[Verse 3] Now u probably got the picture of us two, and nothing in the sew is true,
I explained in the real words, not lying as the newspaper “The World”.
Hope u care about what I said, cuz this what happened is not so rare.
Maybe Ur daughters death is near, u don’t know even where,
maybe in the shopping mall, or maybe here, in Ur house.
Cuz these kids never care about how and where.
I hope u don’t do what I did, I made a mistake.
Today’s kids don’t want to be protected like that, so now u have to make ‘em glad.
When u see Ur boy or girl, laid on the bed, u ask ‘em what happened, they answer,
then ask why askin’, say nothing, take ‘em to shopping, buy some things and then come back home. But don’t do it to much, cuz then I will be touched, and u see u’re broke.
Understand? I don’t have to explain more, I drink some coke, and finish this song.

[SajN]

lol, why?

[SajN]

ey,I was a kid.
The song was inspired by Happy Birthday by Flipsyde BTW

[James R.]

Rofl so glad mine wasn't in this. M first shit was TERRIBLE lmao. This is cool though, seeing how far we've come from this. Propz to erbody

[SajN]

You guys have so much structure than mine when I first started out

[Spyder]

hahaah i member my first peice... pretty bad lol
we've all come miles

[Noeezy]

yeah my first raps were pretty bad
Coleon yours was actually pretty good for starting out, the flow went kinda smooth for me

[gutawafang]

yeah my first raps were pretty bad
Coleon yours was actually pretty good for starting out, the flow went kinda smooth for me

I remember Coleon and me practicing a lot last year in the multi cypher thread.

[Arabian Shady]

thats a reali good find,lmao i cant believe i tried a battle rap for a first post in the CW section, nice to see many old peeps here, makes me realise that every 1 starts small-its how you mold yourself that shapes you into the best
SIck Shit
peace

[gutawafang]

Word Scott. I guess you referring to me. Glad you felt it. I kinda feel it again too. Haha. Cuz I was damn in love back then.